by Passions_Fool
As much as I loved the story and the cast and the sex, goddammit you made me tear up at the end
I am a 63 year old man with grand kids. Been more barfights than I can count, been gunshot twice (and STILL won both times.) So I am reading porn stories and you go make me tear up. Damn you, I say, damn you.
Great job.
It was the only appropriate way to end the story in my view. Glad you enjoyed it!