All Comments on 'Ava and/or Eva Pt. 08'

by Passions_Fool

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1Direwolf1Direwolfover 7 years ago
I am soooo mad at you

As much as I loved the story and the cast and the sex, goddammit you made me tear up at the end

I am a 63 year old man with grand kids. Been more barfights than I can count, been gunshot twice (and STILL won both times.) So I am reading porn stories and you go make me tear up. Damn you, I say, damn you.

Great job.

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Wasn't my intention, but ...

It was the only appropriate way to end the story in my view. Glad you enjoyed it!

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