All Comments on 'Avalon Ch. 03'

wait... so he's hypnotizing Trish into being a willing sex slave?

The short answer is "Yes." Avalon (in three parts) is the tenth chapter in the a chronicle. Trish was introduced, and hypnotized, in Chapter Seven: "Rubens and Telemann" MP2

Seriously you would chill a Merlot. Sacrilege! White wine should be served at 12degrees centigrade. Red at room temperature. Flavour is lost by cooling.

LOL! Thanks for that wine tip. Too bad Dr. Carter, a quarter of a century ago, in California, didn't have, or care to follow, that well-agreed, world-wide, guide. But then, he fucks spellbound barely, legal, teen-age girls. What can I say? You are probably right, he is a philistine... at least regarding oenology! MP2

Now I've heard it all, the splooting is antierotic, ridiculous, moreso than most adolescent fantasies.

'Sploot' is a time-honored descriptive dynamic which may be helpful for many readers as they visualize the prose. Of course, one reader's turn-on may be another's turn-off. Thank you for reading my stories. MP2