All Comments on 'Ava's Immoral Soul Ch. 01'

The storyline is fine the way it was told is not for me,some will like it but the crude language is over the top in my opinion.this could have been so erotic.

It's obvious you spent time with this and it payed off. Great story, with your imagination at work I look forward to reading the rest!!!

This was a fantastic read. I am absolutely looking forward to more!

I loved this story...mmmmm! Very sexy. Very taboo, but glad to see the man controlled himself for the most part. I love masturbation stories involving girls, this was good.

Extremely sexy, can't wait to read more.

Well polished style

A tremendous new talent comes to Literotica. Look forward to many more submissions from this author.

fantastic hot erotic and such a sexy story mmmmmmm I did love it so much and looking forward to more and more from you well done to you:)