All Comments on 'Ava's Immoral Soul Ch. 03'

Very nice. Looking forward to more, either in this series or something new, if you plan for this one to be the climax of the series.

I think it could work as one if you wanted to leave it there, although I suppose there's some potential with involving Roxie again.

In any case, well done.

- Petrov.

A wonderfully written story. The violence isn't my usual cup of tea, but you wrote so well that I couldn't not read it. I guess that some incestious relations do begin in that way, I just hope it can turn into a loving, sexual relationship. The touches of humor and vivid descriptions are beautiful touches, made the reading a real pleasure. This story could continue for ages, lots of twists and turns that could be taken. Thank you for making it long enough to be enjoyed as I masturbated, hope that doesn't disturb you.haha Richard

I felt uncomfortable reading this,but once started could not stop,very erotic indeed

I have never commited incest but I had a very similar experience with my friends daughter.For the time she spent in our house she might as well been my daughter.She drove her parents nearly out of their minds and you have guessed it ,I went like a lamb to the slaughter.She was a virgin but was she a real firebrand,fortunatly we were not found out it surprised many that I was the only one she listened to.That was some years ago and we still find time for clandestine red hot sessions.This story appears to be violent at times, but believe you me it is very true to life.I would love to read more about these two.

Fantastic btilliant and sexy srotic story I could not stop reading and I hope to hear and read more from you cause you are a terrific writer imo thank you:)

Like one of your other commenters, I didn't really like the violence and felt uncomfortable with the father/daughter affair - but your writing is so good! Descriptive, believable and building slowly to a great and loving ending. I lasted all the way through the three chapters before giving in to lust at the same time as Rob - Well done and please do more.

Anal rape. I know she "wound up liking it" in the end but he could have gotten more lube or oil and not have been violent at all made her crave it and him. Thts the major issue.