All Comments on 'Average Joe Ch. 03'

Solid and trustworthy as always, DG. Good stuff, real and believable. You da man!

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Your stories are like a narrative of "the life story of......" They are still interesting and the characters are well developed. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is not an average joe sexual initiation! Great fun though!

Fun story and nice read

It isn't just average Joe, it is average people who know what they want and how to get it without all the airs and graces or the opposite that are seen in many stories. Thanks for a good read

Just started reading this series, and I have to say that I'm loving it. Another great story from you DG, Can't wait for more of Joe's story.

~Nightime

A solid 4, much improved and not just because of the sex. The story is finally rolling, though I did find some issues:

"Joey, since this is your first time you will be coming quickly.

-then-

"Joey, you're not going to last long this first time. Let's hurry up and get it over with for you."

He literally just ejaculated 5 minutes ago, all over your tits.

Uhmm, if she's so confident that he's gonna pop in 30 seconds, why not blow him to completion and let him have that amazing experience?

Then, with his (second) cum out of the way, he'd have some stamina so his first time isn't so pathetic and embarrassing? Instead, she sucks him to even higher levels of arousal and he pops in moments and, go figure, he feels shitty about it.

For the woman that is supposed to be educating him about sex she's an idiot.

"...I just figured once you shot your first load into me that it would be awhile before you came again. That's already twice in one hour."

How is it his first load if he's shot off twice in ten minutes? (Twenty at absolute outside, no way it took them an hour to climb the stairs, drop trou and *pop*)

Why would she get dressed - she had a swimsuit on, all she did was go into her house, why get dressed to teach about sex?

Again, yes there are some issues, but the story as a whole seems to be moving towards an actual tale to be read instead of a history lesson.

Sex scenes could use some spicing up.

Giving you 5 stars on your story. I like Average Joe's character. I like the atmosphere and all the characters involved. Going on to Chapter 4. Keep writing please !