All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A genuinely sympathetic character

Often there are characters with whom one can identify but rarely one as sympathetic as Rick. Despite him falling for Avery and knowing that Brian is likely to prove an issue he is prepared to put Avery first by letting him know that he phoned. A genuine good guy. And I guess he is going to have to give Avery a lot of support is things go wrong.

Also this is a nicely written story. Look forward to seeing where your inspiration takes you.27

BitchWhoMadBitchWhoMadover 4 years ago
5 Stars

So sad I want to cry no cap. Poor Rick

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Hello, my name is Chance. I'm a 44 year old (45 in October) gay man, happily married with three kids. My oldest just graduated from college and the two youngest are in high school. I also have a dog, and one cat that is my own, and multiple strays that I feel the need to feed ...

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