All Comments on 'Avis in The Mechanical Dollhouse'

Hey, I just absolutely adore this story, it’s dark delicious descriptions with an air of the seedy backstage life of the theatre!

These elements give this tale a feel of reality for me, whilst reminding me of the feminist film ‘To Much Pussy.’

Wonderful

So well-written, dark, and incredibly HOT! Well done -- five stars.

it was written well, but I just could not get into it

I love reading comments on here, so, thank you for taking the time to do so. Don't feel bad if you couldn't get into it, they can't all be winners. Criticism is appreciated as well.

both onstage and especially behind the scenes.

Really liked the story. Hope there will be more.