All Comments on 'Awakened to the Forbidden Ch. 03'

This chapter was definitely a big big disappointment to me as far as Stephanie & Colin goes. I figured that Ashly and Colin would eventually have sex and would deal with Stephanie when the time was right . I did not like how Stephanie ,after trying to get Colin and Ashly together in the first place become so jealous that she basically found the first guy and screwed him . Definitely not a way to start the beginning of the end of a good story. Not good . Just the way i feel . The rest of the story and the other 2 chapters were excellent , but the Stephanie thing just ruined this chapter as a whole for me .Sorry. Hope the final chapter is finished soon so we will be able to see how Colin, Stephanie, Ashly and Joey is going to handle this. I think i know ,but hope I'm very wrong ..... Thanks

This story is so good but then a petty bitchy little Stephanie fucks his friend thats lower than low, a stranger would have been better. Now his next deployment will be hell and the family is all messed up. I hope you patch up the relationships and get the sisters to have there own little relationship. the only way the three way can work is if the sisters are also lovers. Then they can live happily ever after. Thanks for the stance on strict birth control I appreciate it

it took you a year and a half to finally write another chapter and you fucked it up royally nothing but a total waste of time. since steph fucked his buddy it is all he will hear about when they go back after the leave is over and it will eat at him. he will end up hateing her and probably never come back except to take little sis with him if he doesn't take her with him now. way to screw things up dip stick i wonder if you even thought before writing this. you sure didn't reread the first chapters to reaquaint yourself with the story like you should have delete this garbage and write a proper chapter that follows the first two.

DBRS

When I started Awakened to the Forbidden, I wanted to write a story with love and passion and conflict. I plotted it out to give myself an idea of how it would go from beginning to end. The plot hasnt changed. And it wont.

One thing Ive always loved about Literotica is being able to explore my creativity without restraints and share my work with thousands of avid readers. Regardless, I dont think Ill be able to write here much longer. But I wont leave you hanging.

For those enjoying the story, I should have the last chapter up by the end of the summer. I wont tell you what will happen, but I promise youll get a nice HEA.

It probably wont satisfy everyone, but the rest of you who have followed my work and supported me since I started writing here...well, you will be pleasantly surprised. You know how I writeand what I enjoy writing.

Actually, you might be able to figure out where this is going. But dont spoil it for the others ;)

Warmly,

Bianca

This story is good. I like the characters and the way Steph has become irrational is a good twist for the story. Incest can't be easy to deal with and people do crazy things when in love. Good work, waiting for the last chapter.

you will never make it as a career writer the way you fuck up your stories and take forever to write chapters. you should look for a more suitable job like waitress or sales clerk you deffinetly aren't a writer.

I just wanted to say that i love Your work! I'm sure i've read them atleast 10 times. Amazing i love the way Colin doesn't want to hurt his sisters in anyway and that he's so protective ! Looking forward to the next one !

Tommy ;)

older sis is a whore after waiting for him bull shit you fucked it up

Make the forth part just about the siblings...Remove the Joey Character.

I enjoyed the story an hope u finish love it when there's an ending

this joey stuff ruined this story for me in a big way

Was going g well till everyone else got involved. Why can't I find a sibling incest story that has no trouble except maybe the parents fi ding out or being told that ends with the siblings living happy together.

Just had to fuck things up with Stephen getting first little sister involved then another guy why when it would have been better for just Colin and Stephen to end up as husband and wife and looking after little sister. When will realise that sibling love do the work the way most people write it..

why do you authors fuck up sibling love stories by bringing outsiders and others into the mix?

Really ruins a good love story. I hope you can fix it in the following chapters

Another fucked up ending bring in outsiders