All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice!

Nice!

A LOT nice... ;-)

Keep going!

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 10 years ago
Interesting....

wouldn't that be interesting to be stuck with this problem for just a little while. Oh I can think of several women I would like to be able to read their thoughts and fantasies. Imagine being able to make their fantasies come true....... Good job and keep it going.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 10 years ago
Wow, wow, wow!!!

This is the most amazing and intriguing series. You can pull anything out of your erotic lit head and it will fit. So much fun and so much sex. Love it. Thank you.

C_frommnC_frommnover 10 years ago
Can

Anyone say HAREM. the guy has a "lesbian" wanting him and other Nurses coming back for more. All he needs is Out of the Hospital and they will follow him to his Home.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 10 years ago
Please

Longer chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I've read a few mind control stories just for the fun of it but they're not very erotic. But I couldn't read half a chptr with out jerking off! If he touches two people at once would it work like a confrence call? And I can't wait to see what cums of him and his daughter!!! Keep cumming with more chptrs!!! SPIN183

ansdguyansdguyabout 10 years ago
C-frommm

If you want a story with a harem in it so badly, start writing one. This story belong to m_storyman_x.

percheronpercheronabout 10 years ago
Quality over length anytime

Great story line. I look forward to many more chapters. Some have commented about the shortness of each chapter so far but I can't agree. You are publishing almost daily, thank you and each chapter is self-contained and carries enough substance to be thoroughly enjoyable. Keep up the great work

MasterDnlMasterDnlabout 10 years ago
continue please

continue please

InosolanInosolanabout 10 years ago
We kan haz moar?

Pleez?

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