All Comments on 'Awakenings Ch. 03'

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Please keep up the great work your doing but please finish each story your doing before starting any more. I'm reading all your story's and I like each one but your stretching yourself writing so many at once please continue each one thank you

Hi. Just a few comments. I'm having trouble following some of the characters because they are so uneven. Your hero does not like to be messed with, but he does not seem to mind figuratively running his had up the crotches parts of some of the women, which makes no sense. He's angry at the doctor who is trying to have him killed, but he keeps breaking his legs, but leaving his mental abilities in place so he can attack again, which is just dumb beyond all belief. One of the women who works for the bad guys has a heart of gold but does not seem to care if the folks she works for kills a few innocent people along the way. You may clear this up in future installments, but it had to care about most of the characters in your story.