by Pars001
It's your story & you're allowed to proceed as you wish , but finding the leader raping his love ,to leave him alive after killing & crushing the underlings is unrealistic , which of course is in itself silly since it's a fictional story ..If he could cut off his balls he could do the same to his head.
A lot of us are surprised that you decided to continue the story. What I mean by that is simply that your hero had the chance to destroy the evil leader and yet he didn't. Now if you think about that it makes absolutely no sense at all. Why would he let him go and continue to kill innocent people. Those deaths will now fall on your heroes shoulders. I have to say this story is starting to really go down hill.
This story and your hero makes no sense. He leaves the chief villain alive after he was about to rape the love of his life. It seems the more sick and twisted you are, the smaller the chance Tahir will permanently disable or kill you. So, I'm done here. Tahir is just too stupid to continue to follow.
I don't see need for complaining its great especially the plot.
With all the evil the leader was responsible for, Tahir not ending him is totally ridiculous and has lost my interest. You could have created someone even worse to continue the story, but this takes away period. The doctor is another of the same category. How does he justify to himself if you want to be at all believable letting these two go on to hurt and kill so many others leaving their blood on your hero. He shows no remorse at killing thousands, but spares the two worst...I don't even know what more to say!
If you were in his shoes would you be more worried about the one you love or the evil basterd that at that point was on the ground in intence pain? Personally I'd have ignored the prick and gotten my lady out of there as fast as I could so in my eyes it's realistic on one hand the I'd have killed the doctor the second time he messed with me.
Holes big enough to throw an oil tanker through. The premise was promising but the characters are thin at best and the plot is tanking hard. Sorry, thanks for trying but this is where I get off.
I agree with some of the commenters from 5 years ago. This story is a ridiculous waste of time. Damn, I'm bummed I wasted so much time here.