All Comments on 'B.M.O.C. - Big Man on Campus Pt. 02'

by youngwriter42

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot and Clever!

The ability to write clever, meaningful dialogue is rare in all literature. It's almost unheard of in erotic literature. The clever, realistic banter between your characters makes everything about your story better. It even makes the sex hotter! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very enjoyable

I really like the story and characters. When is he going to get some unprotected action from these girls :)

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