by hotpup
hotpup:
I thought ch. 1 was hot until I got to ch. 2 . . WOW! Can't wait for ch. 3. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I had to downgrade your score because (1) you left out a big block of activity between chapters 1 & 2, and (2) you need help on some items of grammar, e.g., the difference between the forms of "lay" & "lie". That's just basic grade school English.