All Comments on 'Baby Sitting Snooping'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
baby sitting

like the story but does both of you go any farther does you both have fun together? please tell more

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGover 14 years ago
the answer

the answer to the last question is no, she didn't rule it out, and hopefully she will be calling the babysitter back over for some elaborate fashion shows!!

redkathleenredkathleenabout 13 years ago
ooh I do like this

This is great. Nice simple start and just enough to get your mind racing to the next chapter. Lovely

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
No bad

I don't think that there is any bad writing in your porfolio.

So what is new?

I notice that you use the name Connie a lot, a love maybe?

DEW

oldtwitoldtwitabout 12 years ago
Great

Great quick to the point and a twist?? loved it

GizmorGizmorabout 12 years ago
Snooping

Will there be more of this fine story? Hope so. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More

You should add more, it's a great story

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 4 years ago
Fun with Connie?

Nice story that needs another chapter. It was refreshing that Gloria didn't stutter and stammer when confronted by Connie, like most people do when caught. Sounds like Connie needs just a little push by Gloria. Thanks.

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