All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 08'

Ashley and James must follow together, do not separate them. Ashley, James and the mother together.

great story line, fantastic author

another great story , can't wait for the next part of it keep up the good work

i have never left a bad review in my life...at least not until today. i thought he truly loved ashley. how could he? with a all due respect, ch 1-7 was great. i guess when you start a romantic fic, you should end with a romantic fic. at least that was what i am expecting. sorry.

I don't understand why people are criticizing this fine story. It's an excellent account of how a son schemes to get his stiff dick up between his mother's legs. Down deep it's the goal of every son of course, but Jimmy, this bold young stud, succeeds! Fucking his own mother, he realizes that pissing on the old stupid taboo and tearing it to shreds is a big part of the thrill. Why should his mother's hot cunt, of all cunts, be off limits to her own boy's hard cock? That's the very cunt he came out of! Mom loves getting fucked by her son as much as he loves fucking her. She makes Jimmy harder than he's ever been before. He's already fucked his kid sister up her slit, but his mother's twat feels even better to his big prick! Jim is one fearless family fucker!

Talk about a ruined love story!!! I don't think this dude is capable of feeling true love to do his sister that way!!!

This thing just ratcheted up a couple notches. I'm about spunked out, if you know what I mean. You sir are an excellent story teller.

-Sug

This is the best story I've read on this site since I found it three years ago. The first 6 chapters just made it sound like all Jimmy wanted was pussy. Chapter 7 gave me a new found hope that he really does love Ash but along comes 8 and blew that to bits. WHY?!

that was the dimensional saga of the story all along. It is about sex, falling in love, experiences, and growing up. Don't look at it as the present experience as an adult. Look it through the experience of the journey.

Jimmy truly loves Ashley. He always loved Ashley and fully figured it out, but something was presented to him and he went with it. Jimmy is a young man. He hasn't matured. He is presented with a situation and he goes with it. His hormones are fully engaged and raging. This part of the story is about the moment. Think about something this sexy and animalistic being presented to you as a 19 year old. Are you going to turn it down?

This is one of the hottest stories I have read.

I don't read them for the pronunciations. I read them for the exotic fucking. So keep loving and fucking every woman in the story.

Next I want to hear how sister Jan is tamed and each is Carrying his child❗

Weii, even as hot as that action was, I am totally bummed that he has messed up with Ash. She was always careful. But he wanted to boink whenever and wherever the mood hit him. Now, not using common sense , which believe me I KNOW it is not common anymore,has likely cost him his love with his sister. And maybe his college and his job with gramps and likely any inheritance he might have had coming! He never thought beyond his dick and now he will likely learn life sucks.

You lost me when you involved his mother. Storyline is not good anymore

Why do I feel like crying over a story on Literotica? The betrayal is real.

Maybe because in my fantasies true love is forever and men who say they love you don’t cheat. His love for her was so pure and now he’s just like every other heartless asshole.

I think I’m gonna have to try to sleep this one off and maybe take a break from here for a little while.

It was good while it lasted but we all know nothing good ever lasts.

Goodnight all.

Amazing. Wow. Just wow. I just come in my pants on that Mother/Son scene. Bravo