by Ashson
Read one story you read them all, you follow the same storyline progression everytime. Its the literary equivilent to a Van Dam movie. Im not saying you lack talent, but after this many stories if you cant break out the mold, whats the point?
Sure, if you've read enough to see the pattern and you keep reading, you must like the pattern... I like these for the chrome, the unique bits in each story. How many ways can the same event be told?
Loved the conflicted internal dialogue.
Lots of unanswered questions.
Well written. 5*s