All Comments on 'BabySitter and an ArmChair'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Typical

Read one story you read them all, you follow the same storyline progression everytime. Its the literary equivilent to a Van Dam movie. Im not saying you lack talent, but after this many stories if you cant break out the mold, whats the point?

AxelottoAxelottoover 6 years ago
Well, YEAH...

Sure, if you've read enough to see the pattern and you keep reading, you must like the pattern... I like these for the chrome, the unique bits in each story. How many ways can the same event be told?

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
Great story

Loved the conflicted internal dialogue.

Lots of unanswered questions.

Well written. 5*s

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

All the stories are quite similar but different enough to be interesting

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