All Comments on 'BabySitter Entranced'

Someday, Ashson, you'll have to tell us what happened when you had small kids and hired a babysitter. You seem to be reliving it in all manner of variations of your original primal scene in your stories. I guess maybe you have already told us, in essence, but which of your stories most resembles history? Surely it's not this one. Nevertheless, as always it was good because you write so well! Five stars.

Nice little twist at the end.

Tell us the other half: Jan has a lover and can now be open about it.

Makes me wonder if she was awake the whole time...

about the hypnotism, but a wonderful cute story. I enjoyed this.

It seemed to me Jan and Charlene contrived this plot for some reason. lol lol

The ending sentence may tell the whole story. lo lol