by Ashson
Stupid scene. No 18 year old female could be that dumb. No wife could be that accommodating, unless Steve and Freda previously engaged in these types of activities.
Do we learn when the divorce papers were filed, or did Freda use Steve's actions against him?
So why do so many readers take them so seriously?
all I see in comments .... how much you dislike the story .....simple solution : Stop reading them ! write your own if you are so worried about how "unbelievable" or "boring" they are ~ yet every time a new story is posted you are here to tell everyone your opinion ~ where are YOUR submissions ???
common sense tell one " if you don't like the stories to just move on to another writer "
it gets quite tiresome to read the same bullshit after every story
they are not always the best but they are good and at least Ashson makes an effort to tell them ....do you ??
Hated it. Not exciting, not sexy, just disgusting and stupid.