All Comments on 'Back From The Brink Ch. 01'

Looking forward to the next installment

The story end kind of abruptly, I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

More please. This could be good.

I started to get into where things will go when the story ended for now. Hope we don't have to wait too long for chapter 2

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I'm seeing references to 50 shades in this... not necessarily a bad thing, but be careful not to be prescriptive with it and follow the same formulae

that it's not a good idea to introduce sex into business situations.

Some people never seem to learn.

Sylvia hasn't changed overnight. She hasn't 'reformed'. As much as she's lost, she is like most of us, married to our old ways. She admits that she has a problem with business and sex. I would like to think that she appears to be making progress as the story develops.

Thanks for sharing.

A very good character build and the storyline is fabulous.

She seems to be a very sexy lady and needing a lot of sex. I hope that she becomes the woman that Sebastian is looking for in more ways than just in business.

She needs a man that will take care of her and love her, and will allow her to love him back.

Thanks for the good read.

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How is it a con or a scam, She is broke