by sethp
So Janie has a rival in Donna??
Thoroughly enjoyable, Seth. Can't wait to see what happens next!
janiexx :)
Just the use of the name "Donna" in the description got me interested, so I read it without Part/Chapter 2.
However, it appears you may want/need an editor (this is me volunteering to be it) due to some misspelling & issues with apostrophes, etc.
Where's chapter 3? I mean... Its gotta end right? even in a threesome... hehehe
In my Chapter 1 comment I said Seth was a selfish asshole.
I've revised my opinion: Seth is an arrogant prick.