All Comments on 'Back In Janie's Life And... Ch. 02'

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janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Can't wait to see how this turns out!

So Janie has a rival in Donna??

Thoroughly enjoyable, Seth. Can't wait to see what happens next!

janiexx :)

tnadnudertnadnuderover 9 years ago
Not sure about it

Just the use of the name "Donna" in the description got me interested, so I read it without Part/Chapter 2.

However, it appears you may want/need an editor (this is me volunteering to be it) due to some misspelling & issues with apostrophes, etc.

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventurerabout 7 years ago
Chapter 3?

Where's chapter 3? I mean... Its gotta end right? even in a threesome... hehehe

racfguyracfguyabout 4 years ago
About Seth . . .

In my Chapter 1 comment I said Seth was a selfish asshole.

I've revised my opinion: Seth is an arrogant prick.

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