All Comments on 'Back In Time Ch. 1'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Great time travel story, very erotic with Anna Nicole Smith and her humongous boobs taking the cake. But I have one issue. If they didn't have local money for lodging, how did they pay for the ale? It surely wasn't free!! Yet every time travel story has great potential. But why does this genre always take place in medieval England? Michael Crichton's Timeline also did that. Can't you place the story in ancient Rome? Like in the time of Caligula? Or the Borgias? Can't you make Anna Smith go after searching for Jack the Ripper? Or go after Dracula in Transylvania? There are so many possibilities. You are a good writer, with a fertile imagination. Please think of an interesting plot keeping the voluptuous

Anna Smith as the mc. Good luck.

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