All Comments on 'Back to School: Incentive Ch. 02'

this was fantastic, great descriptions. can't wait to read more from you.

keep it up.

...but it wasn't really the same. The story felt kinda hollow, and the characters were little more than names. Your first Westville story was better.

Good to see that one of the best writers on this site is back. Keep going

I loved this story, and it's really nice to see you're back writing. Keep up the good work! :)

Great idea of Cindy's and brilliantly executed!

Well done, ladies! :-)

My favourite chapter in this series (because we get a scene with Schwartz, who I love the most in all series about Sarah). Maybe fou write a alternative verision of this chapter, where Schwartz lose and she became a slave of Melvin?