All Comments on 'Back to the Farm Ch. 02'

But I thought I said that once already? Maybe it was on someone else's story! Great chapter!

should have stopped at because u called me matt. more dramatic. i love this story. cant wait for more. though, you could find an editor.

great story...cant wait for the next chapter? when is the next Caught by the Tude chapter coming? I wait for it every day!

post more of this

i abouslutely loove it

great work :]

Love it! Cant wait for more! This was such a great chapter! Cant wait for more of caught by the tide too! Thanks

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. I love all your stories.

Great to read this update. It sounds like you might be getting comments and/or criticism about needing to take some courses in English grammar, etc. If so, I can't agree. You have a very natural writing voice. I can see the action. I can visualize Lissy stumbling up the driveway in the rain, I can feel how hurt she was by Matt and his friend and their endless teasing. <br><br>

She is definitely living up to her red hair - fiery temperment! Thank you for updating.

I just found your story and it's so good.

I loved this line "Because you called me Matt." This story is turning out to be a jewel!

I'm simply swooning.... This was an awesome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Thank you Lily! :-)

Very nice romantic story that I found enjoyable to read. Am looking forward to more (of caught by the tide as wel). Happy you didn't make the stereotypical stop at 'because you called me Matt' ;)

loved it cant wait for more chapters

Really loving your story! Excellent writing and I really hope you continue to post so I'm not left waiting on the edge of my seat! I just hope she doesn't let him get away with his poor behavior too easily...I hate when someone is legitimately angry and they end up letting it be excused or explained away way too soon without the proper amount of regret on the wrongdoers part. I hope he really comes to see how badly he hurt her and understands her pain! And is the evil pig of a boy going to show up somewhere down the road?? And be nasty again...ooohhh I could see that happening too! Can't wait for more!

Need to take English and grammar courses? Huh? You are a fantastic writer! I loved Gemma's line about the sandals. "These were made for Jesus Himself."

it's a wonderful story. i just hope she'd stop lying...SOON.

Loving it so far. love all of your work really.

Electricity and phone off before the funeral? Seems quick. Maybe you should have had the storm knock them out instead. Good otherwise though

Great story very emotional.

great story more plz

sqhead

Enjoy your tales but find that most of the heroines seem unsure of themselves and the men come across as arrogant tossers.

Almost damsel in distress being rescued by Mr Darcy.

I have to agree with the previous comment. The male arrogance is very off-putting.

with a faulty memory and an exaggerated case of male privilege.

Such a good story so far.

Excellent details, I can visualize everything!

Quite funny too. 👍🏼

Good story. Two complex characters. Reading on.

" "It's not like I can't get any wetter now anyway!"

I think, in the circumstances, that should be " "It's not like I CAN get any wetter now anyway!""

if you’re trying to write the least likeable character ever you’re doing a very good job

“BORING”. I gave this story a 2 star rating and stopped reading at this point. I won’t bother with a critique of the story or the characters as this author has not been active on this site for over 10 years.

What a horrible way to introduce the main characters.

Painful death of a beloved fatherly uncle and a teenage rival. Author is gifted as the weather in sucking you into a turgid emotional plot.

'The chase is on!'....