All Comments on 'Backscratch Ch. 03'

ALL THIS IS ,IS A VERY LONG TEASE. GIVE IT UP..........................

Sometimes a long slow intense sensual build up is sooooooooooooo intoxicating! I am really enjoying this story with it's sublime lingering passion...keep writing more! Thanks!

I like the anticipation and the chase but I also like the intimacy. Please continue.

It would be cool if they bumped into a stranger on the beach

maybe its time for Myrna to step in and help close the deal. Could Myrna have a special relationship with a son, a revelation that helps Ben's mom finally overcome her continuing reluctance to give in to her true desires? Something that she reveals at the photo shoot?

I agree, the build-up and anticipation are HOT, but you can only carry your readers along just so far before they lose interest -- even with a HOT build-up. It is up to you, but I advise not waiting until chapter eight.

good buildup, if a bit windy at times, with lots of room to flush out as it develops...Myrna creates a possible road to break the final barrier between them, looking forward to the next chapter!

Another long tease. Love the introduction of Myrna, though. Very intriguing.

SUPER HOT chapter!!!!!! Super exciting!!! You are a master writer!!!

Enjoyed Ch. 3. Mother is still not self-aware. Son has still not grown a spine. The son has more patience than God. However, he is not helping anyone. 5 star series; however, I am reading the rest only to find out how long this charade can last.