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Click here"I'm not telling you what to do, only suggesting it. It's hard for me to tell how you feel about her. I bet you're conflicted. You were deeply in love, and then she hurt you. I believe she does love you as much as you loved her. Mom and I love you, but I'm not sure that is enough for me."
I try to talk, but she shushes me.
She continues, "I know you love us; I just don't know if that is enough for you. I can't give you the family you want. No talk, just rest. Let's nap before dinner."
To be continued ...
- COMMENTS
Kahunabobabout 1 year agoBuddy, I honestly like some of your other stories. Reading this one for the first time and it's one just doesn't do it for me. I think you dropped the ball here.
MC is supposed to be some macho alpha male guy. A dominant. Yet at every turn he's being led around the nose by women who really do not seem to have his best interest at heart and only want to get their own rocks off. MC is very much NOT in control of the situation here.
You've reduced your MC to a boy toy or worse, the exact opposite of what I think you were trying to set up as an MC in the beginning. He's quickly turning into a submissive. If that's the end goal of this story line, well, congrats on achieving that. If it wasn't, well, you 'done goofed up'.
MarkT63over 1 year agoHow can you forgive kidnapping, battery, assault, rape, and cuckolding from Vickie???
Nirosualmost 2 years agoNot a fan of the jump in Melissa integration, you have the bad first impression intro, into a month later time skip with them having dated 3 weeks ...there is a lot of content in that month to have it make sense.
Glad Vickie did call the police idk why authors often make the mistake of character not doing that...along with Bills security would be aware of where he is at the very least. Melissa seems like she wouldn't have been dumb enough to fuck with someone who has a metric fuckload of money... Also any background check on Melissa was done fucking shoddy as hell lol, HR did not do its job.
Having the owner of the sex club be an incompetent moron is interesting and hopefully getting her due karma asap
Bill's psych damage is actually handled decently and in that most people would not view it properly and make stupid mistakes aka all the people around him. Though seems to heal faster than it should especially when you had the 2 year timeskip near the start to show he hasn't fully processed the Vickie stuff.
Good on having Bill see through the contract and see that the whole thing is a bit of a scheme
Sophia, yes the whole scene, though did forget on having her check on Vickie
Love Libby, don't know why, but it might be that she embodies the kink/sex club in a positive manner compared to pretty much everyone else who has been linked to it. Hoping come back to her
FlynnTaggartover 2 years agoAnd thats about when I'm stopping the story. The MC is just way too badly abused, shot, shot again, tricked into slave stuff, practically raped by his mother and sister during an emotional time, tricked by his family to try to get back with the slut who caused most of this mess, nearly killed by a woman, and people seem more worried about him getting some girl knocked up then the emotional toll this had on him. Bill's life sounds utterly horrifying.
Radomir1over 2 years agoNymphomania is a disease.
I thought Sofia would tell me more about Vicky and the reasons for her illness. Why there was no treatment. Did it have something to do with Vicky's father? It was mentioned that Vicky always avoided talking about her father.
The author keeps mentioning the restaurant at Tony's. But NY has many other establishments.
To me, Italian food is not the best or most original.
Bill has a complex. If the sister is looking for another guy or Vicky is looking for another guy, then Bill is a bad lover, etc., etc.
But the missing point is that incest is outlawed. And criminally punishable. And everyone is equal before the law. (And he doesn't trust Vicky anyway.
Vicky, on the other hand, is a very solid product. 1,000 sexual acts in a year with one partner is welcome. Congratulations on a fulfilling life. But 1,000 partners in a year? What about illness? What about the threat of pregnancy? I don't talk about reputation. 10-20-30 times a day meeting with men who will talk about past fucks, discuss it, recommend it. It might be fun at first. But I don't think after the first hundred, it won't be as much fun.
Janie loves her brother, wants to be with him, wants kids with him. But worries that she can't give him a full family. That said, she has no problem having sex with her brother in public. Not afraid of criminal prosecution for incest? Then what's the problem? Let her keep fucking her brother and having a baby with him. Start a harem for her brother. With Vicky and her friends. Just take control. All that matters to Bill is that he's the only man in his women's lives and beds.
