All Comments on 'Bad Heather Revisited Ch. 01'

This is an incredible little fantasy story... keep up the good work!

The original with the over-the-top ending was a bit much for many readers (including myself), & I appreciate that you listened to feedback & dialed it back a bit to a more loving/naughty tone, w/o the violence & unrealistic ending. More like this! :D

Your rewrite is amazing. I loved your new ending.

can't wait 4 part 2

I have to admit this was much a much nicer version.

getting fucked while she was away and the girl is just a whore who likes having her bum and pussy smacked...what sluts women are...

Light years better than the first ending....not sure what you were thinking on that one.

I read the original Bad Heather story. I thought it was really hot and pretty good. Mostly it stands on the strength of its great spanking scenes. I wasnt happy with the original ending, but it was certainly deserved by the husbands. I just felt that it spoiled the mood.

Then I read this rewrite. I was expecting it to be the same story with a different ending. I was shocked at the huge improvement made by the added material in the rewrite. It feels fuller and more believable. The added and modified scenes make the progression of spanking so much better. I love... LOVE the added material about the husband and wife. His searching for a job makes his being home feel sense and add to his depth. The wife's affair makes her a much more interesting character. The fact that they actually discuss the spankings together as a husband and wife... These are two people who could actually raise a daughter. That's ironically not something I expect to read in incest themed stories. This is just such a huge improvement over the older version. I didn't think the old story was bad at all, but this rewrite makes it SEEM bad by how much better the rewrite is.

You've turned a pretty good story into a fantastic story. The plot (so far) is fuller and more detailed. The characters are WAY better. The spanking scenes are improved from their already great state. What a huge change. Well done!!!

DID GET MY BLOOD BOILING ABOUT THE WIFE. REMINDED OF MY WHORE X WHOM I RUINED IN DIVORCE COURT. WOMEN JUST CAN'T SAY NO I GUESS. I FUCKING HATE CHEATERS, JUST ME I GUESS.

HOLY FUCKING HELL, THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!

think you ended it a it too soon but was your choice. was a good story at least and seams the girl had learned what she needed too.

Way better than the first version.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Pain + sex = not my thing usually but I must admit, Mr Happy did wake up.

Better than the other version.