by Tepin
That was great 5 stars. Surprising turn of events but there has to be more right?Please tell me that there will be a part 2
The plot and story were nice, but you do need an editor. The mistakes were a frequent distraction.
Lost me at the cock in his face. Yeah no. That was very mean of his fiance.
A very interesting plot twist! But what happened to the rest of the story? It was rolling along on all cylinders then just stopped. The possibilities were endless.