by hetup
I felt like I was there and predicting what happens next,. And that is the best compliment of all. Well done!
What a sleaze. First he disrespects his best friend, the father, and yes Carmen. Then he starts with other married women. His parents are good with this. You paint him as a god like creature who can never do wrong in bed, in school, or in business. Handsome hung and horny. All the women are useless stupid caricatures of real people. Smart enough to have jobs and family and willing to toss all that away because he said so. What a waste of space.
Please The Next One as Soon As Possible
This chapter was over the top. I would give anything to live the life Ryan is enjoying.
And there's the inevitable sharing that happens when a story goes on for too long. Such a shame. It was kind of dirty that he used her insecurity (which honestly seemed to be conveniently introduced to facilitate this plot development - very contrived if you ask me) as a way to let himself fuck another woman. Of course it's totally in character with Ryan sadly; he gets off on this shit. But you know what? This was never really a true romance and love story if I'm honest with myself so I won't hold it against the author here.