by Dark_Brother
While I enjoyed your other stories and how you broke one stoy into perspectives, this is by far the best. Suspense is really nice with the twist
Besides the great sex descriptions this is a really great story in itself and I hope that you have it in you to finish it for the rest of us that are captured by the story itself. I love the incest part of it best.
Very good -- I like that it has an Actual Story to it instead of just being pure sex. It makes me want to read the next chapter so I can see what the hero will think up and how this little race against time will go in general.
The sex reads pretty good too, though incest isn't really my thing - especially not with parents. Only criticism I really have on that is that the positioning is Sometimes a little unclear.
All that said, this is one of the better stories I've seen on here and I'm ready to read more :)
I like the way things worked out with Gina and her mom. (Of course, I'm sure part of why Gina took his explanation in stride so easily was his prior creation and manipulation of her "Acceptance" switch.)