All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 17'

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Timtom12Timtom12over 12 years ago
A good way to start off the year

What's a better way to start off a new year than will yet another wonderful chapter? Nothing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story so far, just hope that Nick stays as the centre of the relationship, rather than Shanna going off to be with Julia or having another relationship. I wish Nick would get more jealous and protective of his women and stop acting like a pushover all the time, especially now that Julia wants to infringe on his relationship with Shanna.

I hope this doesn't to in the same way as in your other story where the protagonist got back with his old cheating girlfriend and she had a separate relationship with his cousin, that aspect of the story was a total turnoff.

Other than that, your stories so far have been great and hope to see more from you.

FseriesFseriesabout 2 years ago

He should have stopped Julia at the party with a switch and it looks like he may have to drop Shanna hard because she’s straying.

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