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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Starting with the alcoholic scene one has to

sanity and mental well being of both. It would take almost 24 hours or longer for all of that alcohol to clear their systems. You know what they say about people that drink two beers a day, they are never sober. That is one way to hid from a miserable existence one calls life.

davion2308davion2308over 14 years agoAuthor
I wrote this... really?

Wait, so the use of alcohol in a fantasy gave me a bad score? Seriously? Why did everyone else vote what they voted? Thanks for helping me become a better writer by being descriptive.

BarbieKenBarbieKenover 7 years ago
Just me

For the most of the story, I like.

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