All Comments on 'Ballerina Mum Performs For Son'

Classic Saula. Beautifully written. Five stars. Thanks for your effort in writing this. I really enjoyed this. You made my day.

I feel very aroused reading your story becos I can relate to it. I’m in my 40s. I’ve a 16yo son. I was an amateur ballerina in my youth. I try not to lose it by doing ballet exercises in my living room at least once a week to stay fit and nimble. An uphill task with each passing year. Now that I have read this story, I’ve come to realize that my son will inevitably be on the couch doing this and that. It hadn’t occurred to me that he may just be surreptitiously checking me out. I don’t quite know what to think of this. Mortified or gratified? But, it’s a nice feeling. I’m thinking of teasing my hubby a bit to check out his reaction. I’m quite tempted to tease my son a little if I get a positive reaction from my husband. I like the idea of removing the breast padding and gusset underliner from my ballet garment. Oh, the very thot of this encourages me to increase the frequency of my dance exercises to 3X a week. Let’s see…

A beautiful tender mom-son love story. So well-written. You’ve a way with words that I’ve not seen anywhere on this site.

I love the way you so skillfully infuse philosophy, art, music, psychology, literature into the story. I never thot I would see an intelligently-written story like this on this site ever. I’m going on to read your other stories. Your narrative style is quite agreeable to my literary senses. Look forward to your next story.

Brilliant!

Wow....not sure I can put into words how much I loved this story. Dark and brooding at times, bright and flowing at others. Hot, sexy, thoughtful... 5 stars and a fav!!!

Fantastic! Would love to know what she has to tell him, could she be pregnant?

Very erotic. Well done.

Absolutely brilliant!! Enjoyed so much and to know its real is magnificent!!!!

Saula, you have done it again. Another mind blowing mother/son story that again pulls us in, and we are living it with you as you tell it. I'm sure it has bits of your own life mixed in with it. Your so good and telling it from a womans point of view. Love it as usual, please write more, and thanks for sharing your insites with us all.

5 Stars plus!

I really enjoyed this the way it was written. Thank you.

This is definitely one of the greatest stories ever published on this site!

Five (5) does not do justice to how great is this story. So happy to fine your works. Bravo and I shall read further. I will attempt to elevate my own works to this level. Help me.

WOW!! Write, write, write!!

Gosh, gosh!

I love the mood in the story. So beautifully rendered. Pensive, reflective, introspective, poignant, interspersed with high euphoric moments. You’re very skillful indeed. Do you write and publish professionally? Would be a shame if you don’t. Such talent…

So cum inducing! Love the merciless tease.

Very enjoyable reading. You’re really masterful with words. 5stars.

Oh wow!

I do my 3X a week yoga in my patio. Usually, my 16yo is there gaming or something. Come to think of it, he always parks himself on the patio lounger 5-10 minutes before my usual yoga time. I had suspected he had been checking me out, but I’ve never been absolutely sure because I have to focus on my yoga and don’t have eyes behind my head. You’ve given me some wicked ideas to up the ante some. I’d like to engage my hubby in this too. Test his reaction. He has been quite sympathetic in the past when I picked skimpy swimsuits for my garden pool sunbathing. Oooo, so many possibilities arising. See what you’ve done, you wicked woman, he he!

Love this story. So different from the noisy hump & grunt fare on this site. Five stars.

Another classic Saula! Love your writing.

You have a unique writing style that is so refreshing on this site. Always enjoy reading your stories. I should say, your works.

I love the way the mom reclines, rests on her son like he is a lounge chair as they watch the videoshoot together of her dancing nude, while he wanks. Very erotic.

I too tease my teen son whenever I do my yoga routine in my living room. Like the story, I’ve removed the breast padding & the gusset underliner, showing my pokies & cameltoe. I enjoy the show, & it encourages me to keep up my routine on weeks when I get lazy & languid. The promise of the exhibitionist thrill arousal really drives me to get on with it. What a nice way to get motivated to exercise & chill. My hubby appears very encouraging on this, & likes to observe our son checking me out. It gives him a massive charge, tho he never tells me so directly, but I know because he fucks me harder than usual each time after my yoga. In fact, he likes to fuck me immediately after the yoga, saying since I’m sweaty anyhow, why not we fuck too, so that I can bathe after that. Very convenient for him! He gets a kick out of fucking me while I am in the yoga leotard. I think he imagines our son ravaging me after watching my yoga. I have been thinking of graduating onto nude yoga, like I do it, & then my son walks in, & I carry on as if in deep trance oblivious to everything, zoned out. Wouldn’t that be something!

Excellent erotica. We can do with more of this on this site. Reading your other stories now.

We have a teen son. I do yoga at home as routine exercise. I’ve accidentally on purpose left a copy of this story for my husband to know that I read this story & found it fascinating. My hubby has talked about our son checking me out in the past. This will add to our conversation.

I read. I came. Thanks!

So erotic! 5 stars. Do write a Ch 2. I’m intrigued by the story ending. So many possibilities… Is the mom pregnant?

You’re wicked good with words. Ch2,pls?

Ha ha, to think that a Literotica story references Kierkegaard, Schopenhaeur, Nietzsche, Monet, Ruben, Tchaikovsky, Freud, DH Lawrence, Simple Harmonic Motion amid fucking, cock, balls, pussy, clit, in the same narrative breath. Brilliant! Nice change from the usual sex bluster. Do write on. I love your distinctive style.

Super hot! What a tease! I read it twice over & each time, I came stronger. I can almost imagine this is a lite porn video. Five stars. Deserve more.

Chapter 2 pls? You can’t leave us hanging high & dry with your enigmatic titillating conclusion. Is the mom pregnant? What are they doing in Sth America?

I’m a Liberal Arts undergrad. Luv the way you so skillfully weave the Arts & Humanities into an erotic story, & yet sitting well with fucking, cock, balls, pussy, clit, cum. You’re soooo talented.

Had me cum buckets…

Gosh, gosh. To think that it’s possible to write like that.

Hot!

Sexy, 5 stars! Love the teasing.

Cum

Overall i loved the story. The ending left al lot untold..

Sensual and sensuous. Lush and luscious. Love and lust. God, this is good.

I watch my mum do yoga in our home. We live in a small apartment in the city. Like this story, her yoga leotard is very high-cut/waisted & very sexy. Often, the bottom vee slips into her pussy like a g-string showing some lip & fine wisp curls. I think she is all-natural & sparse down there altho I don’t know for sure. My mom is a young 56. I check her out during her yoga & she knows it, but we don’t talk about it or kid about it. It is just not us. But I know mom secretly enjoys the attention. Yesterday, I intentionally left this story on-screen on my laptop to spark my mom some. I am awaiting her reaction over the next few days. She does yoga 3X a week. Cant wait…

Oh so hot! So hot! Reading the rest of your collection now…

I do my lite dance & yoga routine twice a week, an hour each session. My garment is quite slinky, sheer & skimpy because I exercise when no one is at home, so it’s comfy & cool. I’ve decided to time my next exercise to be 15 mins before my son returns from school. He will find his mommie dearest in an advanced contorted yoga position, fully concentrated, zoned out. In reality, I’ll be trying to sense his reaction. My hubby is a tech buff. We have a CCTV security system wired in the common areas of our home. I wonder what his reaction will be if he reviews the CCTV video & sees our son checking me out? Will he tell me? I knows he gets aroused when other men leer at me. But, our son? Hmm… Let’s see. Tx for the inspiring story. You really know how to stir imaginations.

I love this story. I too love watching my mum do her exercises in our patio. She is a sprightly 62, but can pass off as late 40s. This story has inspired some ideas in me. Come to think of it, my mum does enjoying doing her exercises in my presence, because she would ask me this & that. And silly me thinks she really wants to know the answers. I see possibilities ahead. I thank you for planting this wicked seed of an idea in my heated mind. And oh, needless to say, 5 glorious stars.

Erotica doesn’t get better than this.

I love to watch my mom exercise in her leotard. She knows I’m checking her out each time but doesn’t seem to mind. I can really relate to this story. Five stars for making me cum.

Hot erotic story

Sexy cum inducing

Sequel pls

I do yoga with my mom. It gets interesting sometimes in the more exotic positions. Love this story. I am going to let my mom read it accidentally on purpose. Hot writer.

My dad loves to watch me when I exercise. Only when mom is not in. I tease him a little. So far he has only looked. He checks me out. Would love it if you write a similar dad-daughter story.

The scene where the son dancing nude with the mom is so hot. Son straining, poking at his mom. Mom clamping his dick between her upper thighs milking him. So hot. I came from reading that. The image stays in my mind long after. Brilliant writing. This story can be made into a lite erotica porn. And write a Ch2 please.

So vivid. Better than porn. 5 stars.

Super erotic

Oooo this is sooo good. I’m all wet & this is my third reading.

Needs a ch2. Dont disappointment.

Erotic

Beautiful mother-son love story. Chapter 2 please

I googled. The song referred to in the story by the MonaLisa Twins actually exist! Beatles-nuanced beautiful lyrics & melody. Played it on youtube. Wonderful!

The ending… the mom pregnant?

Hot

I like it that you write unapologetically like a Brit with all the Brit nuances. Too many Brit contributors Americanize their writing losing the charming Brit essence. I love the matter-of-fact Brit dry wit.

“… I feel him letting go. Launching. A fountain erupting inside me. Three, maybe four bursts. Semen oozing. A seminal moment.”

“I am lying on my side too, facing his groin. I slowly slide my face against his raging cock. My cheeks feel the hotness of his straining son meat. I glide my face up and down along one side of his cock, then moving to the other side. I turn the other cheek. I do this again..”

“It is night. The rainstorm has blown over. The Good Lord is done raging.”

Here is another completely awesome Saula story. Not sure how she does it but she keeps out doing herself with each new story.

I also really enjoy hearing how her stories effect Saula's readers. Some of their comments are heart racing and full of excitement as well. I love reading from the other mom's comments and how they have changed their lives from Saula's stories / ideas. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing Saula and mom readers.

Thank you so much for your amazing erotic story .

The quality is beyond expectations.

Erotic and sensual

Michael age 68

Such a well-written story! I’ve read it 5X, it’s just as good each time. Keep up the great writing.

Sooo good! My sis is a professional ballerina. I often check her out when she is limbering up in our living room. So far, nothing had happened. This story has convinced me I have to bring this to the next level. I’m not sure but I think she teases me sometimes with some provocative sexy dance moves when I’m watching, asking me this and that on what I think, full knowing that I know nothing about dance.

A writing quality to it.

very erotic,my wife isn,t a ballerina but she loves to put a miniskirt&blouse&braless&lingerie and sexy wedges &high heels around the house cleaning or dancing on a song playing on the radio,she confess to everyone here it,s her fav fetish to tease&show off to our son,it makes her feel kinky&naughty&slutty and controlling me because she does it for him&herself,i,m just very lucky she allows me watching at her,like it!

One hardly knows how to begin, with so many superlatives. It was a wonderfully written story with classical references, philosophy, physics, poetry, history and dance.

I’ve been reading porn ever since I found a paperback full of incest stories in the bathroom in 1963, having been left there by my mother I suspect.

I’m now 72, and in all that time, I have never read anything approaching the quality and beauty of your writing. Deep thanks. David

Such gorgeously erotic, beautiful writing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Unusual and erotic. I could see her. Wish you would have written the ending with the husband back on the scene. I will read more of your stories. Thanks!

Many thanks for a very arousing read. You are most talented.

Never thot I’ll read such a well-written erotic story on this platform. Beautiful wordsmithing.

Gosh! Gifted! Truly gifted! Cant wait to read the rest of your collection. You should publish your works.

What a find! Stories like this are why I plod through so much dross on this site.

Wow

Just, "WOW."