All Comments on 'Banished!'

Thanks for a great read . Enjoyed the use of multiple elements .

Please continue this story i loved every word!!!

Five stars JB! Love all the classical and literary references! Not as much sex as usual but enough to keep my interest. Have to wonder if Helen will turn up with Troy! (Couldn't bring myself to say if Helen would come [cum] with Troy!) Definitely looking forward to more of this tale!

But how does it end.....? I’m a sucker for the HEA

For all that the story is whimsical...in a sexual kinda way it’s still (unfortunately) pretty much a reflection of today’s society (brutal death aside).

A fucked up twisted leadership and a corrupt judicial system blaming (for the most part) women and claiming the (im)moral high ground.

I enjoyed it very much, keep up the good work!

Not sure the premise of the story holds up. The morality police were banishing (killing men and women) due to nudity but then publishing it in bars? I know its a work of fiction but it's just a thought.

The setting is a "post apocalyptic world". What did happen? Things like Orcs and Centaurs in it, with a highly technological society in it? Did Earth enter a alien dimension that portrays legendary creatures with a 2024+ Earth type civilization? Is the planet like that depicted in the old He-Man/Shera TV shows, only that a "Morality Police" State rules it? These questions and the story is interesting. By the way, that is really fine work. 🍟🌮🌭🍔🍗🥪🍨🍿🎂🧀

What is the cause of the "apocalyptic" situation going on here? Was it some kind of dimensional shift to a alien dimension(more possibilities for more stories), since there are Centaurs and Orcs in this? This is like Dungeons & Dragons meets a Police State after some event had thrown Earth into the apocalyptic situation. Are there other sentient, even semi-sentient races here, like Elves, Trolls, Slimes, Gnomes,Dwarves for example? The story does mention the Centaurs and Orcs, thus the inquiries and/or other questions. Imagine that Police State society having to fight Mermaids, Sirens as well as Megladon Sharks, Dragons. This will provide some ideas, as will as a story idea about a Amazon-like society(Implied here, since the protagonists' community is appearantly ruled by women at this time) that may develop at a later time. You have done excellent work here. 🥰🥰🥰🥰