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She played, she paid!

Good story, as always, well written.

Regards, DJ

the display of logic he used in the final metting is a killer.

He got her to freely admit and concede that he Is as a Man sensitive and considerate to her feelings and that is their history if he was doing something wrong or negelectful He fixed it a soon as he could.

There is no "communicaton" problem here... she never went to him to complain and/OR talk about what she thought was his lack of bedroom skills.

IF she had done so and the Hubby reacted with the idea... "too bad" OR "well thats all I can do"... THEN she might have a moral leg to stand on...

But she didnt do that. The fact that she thinks it is OK to FUCK the old boyfriend Lie about it and never tell her husband that He he is not doing enough in the nedroom Kills this marriage

and also his saddest.

It's tight and perfectly put together, and there isn't much to say. They may love each other, but what she did to him just isn't acceptable--and he isn't going to accept it.

Well-done.

ohio

Saying you love someone does not mean that you love that person! Love is a verb implying actions. It's just sex does not address the trust, honesty and respect issues.

Thanks for an excellent story!

SleeplessinMD

Thanks for a good story, JPB.

there was nothing new in this story except this time you didn't hire a private dick and use video equipment like in numerous other stories.

I doubt many men could stay with a woman who was fucking someone else once they witnessed them together.

He's sure correct; she wouldn't have to rip him apart just tell him he wasn't doing her any good and he needed to do something about it.

Well, now she could go fuck Jeff all day and all night!

One of your better stories. But, your last paragraph killed it for me. Thus instead of 100 you get nothing(00).

Last paragraph for me too. Oh, and by the way,

Who gives a rats ass if someone is reviewing stories someplace. We don't need some review jerk to tell us ANYTHING!

Typcial JPB wimp husband drivel-at least this time you did not have the wimp take her back & lick her boots-as you usually do in your stories. No revenge on her or the other guy? Another variation on the "wimp-husband" theme.

All characters are actually cheated out of humane life. When finishing the story, I sighed in relief in the same way when you wake up from a nightmare, happy to realize it’s not your real world. Even when my main “informers” from the posters show that there is a promising story, to the most part its still (as this story was) an unlivable universe, and finally incredible one. The men characters are either shadows of themselves, filled with fears and grateful to still be accepted by their cheating wives, or they are cold determined and detached robots. The women characters are hardly human. They always cheat of course. They vary only by the degree of their despicability and cruelty. The cruelty of the final dialogue was breath taking indeed.

About the life he know's. If all you know is sluts, thats what you write about. My first two wives were sluts. I used to work around them all day. When I was younger. I only reason I don't write. Is JPB covers the subject better.

I'm not a fan of yours and normally skip reading your stories, but after readng this one I feel I must have misjudged you. My apology. I thought this was a very fine story about two people who really did love each other but had an apparent sexual incompatibility, Sad story especially in light of the fact that they both seem sincere and loving., and even though she blew it I felt sympathy for both of them. It must be a tribute to your writing. In most of these stories you tend to end up despising one or the other of the characters in the plot. 60 year old George

Good tale of a marriage gone wrong because the partners weren't communicating. Easy prose to read and nicely done. My only gripe concerns some hiccups in the grammar that your editor should've caught. I'd give you a 100 for the overall quality of the writing but the oopsies in grammar drop it to a 75.

I liked it and you have my thanks for a tale well-told.

I wonder what your mind frame was on this one the only good thing about this story was that the husband wasn't a cockhold but what wife expects a husband to hang around while she fucks some other guy, I think most readers perfer revenge in a cheat story and thats a better way to go.

He should have taken a bat and busted out the windshield of the vw then busted the the boyfriends head and the rest of his body.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

He should have taken a bat and busted out the windshield of the vw then busted the the boyfriends head and the rest of his body.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

trust and respect is what make a marriage and she don't have it for husband.

a certain type of woman, fiftyish, good looking and intelligent. Trouble is that many of these women are married. I keep remembering many stories I have read on lit. not the wimp husband ones but the ones where the husband still has his balls and gives his wife what for. The only problem is the things that the wives say after they are caught. I never never want to be around that type of woman...they are true predators and sluts and I don't like sluts.

bard would talk about the mundane, but not the lousy

sex life. this person comes back and feels no compulsion

to even address it. she wanted to play, and he screwed it up by finding her secret.

now she can have jeff as much as he'll play,or anyone else.

there should be more consequences for her.

THE BOTTOM LINE, SHE FUCKED SOMEONE WHILE BEING MARRIED. END OF STORY, GET RID OF HER AND MOVE ON.

Ok in this context he did right to fuck her off. What happens to them now? I think she quickly recovers, she's attractive and still young, desirable, and has no qualms about sex. A few years down the line she's learnt from her mistakes, with her new guy she doesn't cheat. Ok unlikely. So she doesn't ever get caught out then. She has a life. But the husband? Sex ain't big on his agenda. He's not a very social person, all his friends are work related, and now he has the big black sign above him. He's insecure, he'll find it hard to trust anyone. He better hang on to the dignity he preserved by kerbing her because it's a tough journey to a life better lived. Lonely. And he may not make it. Even his friends whisper about him. He called the fucking cops on his wife? Pussy action. So he grows bitter and sad. Resentful. Women can smell loser, he doesn't get many second dates, hardly gets to second base, and then...nothing.

So here's the question. Hotwife...or no wife? Encroaching loneliness or a swinging social circle of likeminded nudge and winkers? Hedonism or boredom?

I know this doesn't apply to many people on this site,which I assume is a fairly broad mix of society. But Loving Wives sure brings out the twisted and the creeps. I personally like that, as long as they can take a little of what they give. Better they spew their load of ranting misogyny and paranoid hatred here than on the streets, amongst our families. I sympathise with them, they'll never get the joy of erotica because they'll never be in a position to do so. And it can't be easy to love if you're in jail, whether literally or in one of your own making. Metarphorically.

I love my wife. We've been together slightly longer than the guys in this story. We both had shady pasts. She was extremely promiscuous. I was from hard tracks and have made out ok. We're both self educated and proud of ourselves and our little family. And we swing.

If anyone is still reading, I'm gonna close on a little vignette that I think sums up something about us. We were going out to a 'party' and I had booked a cab. It turned up and I yelled upstairs for her to hurry and went out to chat to the driver. I like seeing guys faces when she makes an appearance...sure enough she looked stunning with her thick blonde mane, a mini green dress just covering the cheeks of her bum, tan slender legs...and fucking flip-flops. Still...Thanks Just Plain Bob. I seriously hope I've written something other than pure crap. I would like to try a story. After all, what is fiction? And what ain't? Mancelt.

just say "Barb, what would you do if it was me fucking someone in the back seat of a car? Could you accept that?"

Your characters never seem to be able to figure that out. When she says "It was just sex." all they need to say is "OK, I'm going out tonight to get some strange."

Wham Bam good-bye ma'am! He appropriately moved her to the curb!

American men are really funny and I presume that these stories reflect the general moral atmosphere.

Poor Barb, she is in love with a cretin who thinks only of himself his job and his sexual needs. It never occurs to him that his wife is a human being who has her own agenda. So he finds out that he's a sexual nurd and his reaction is that its all Barbs fault, when in reality its all his. Sex is only a small part of loving someone, what an idiot.

One feels that this describes a lot of true blue American men, and you wonder why your country is falling apart at the seams.

Yeah really American men are funny, poor Barb has needs that have to be met and this imbecile husband wasn't up to it. Then the whimpy excuses that he has to work to pay for the house and food I find disgusting had he been unemployed he would have had the time to do his wife but also improve his technique and use his idiotic hard working neighbor's wife.

Had he been a real man he would have become a politician, someone we can respect like Ensign, Edward, you know real men.

Yes oliverra I have a sense of humor too.

and morons like fern501 and oliverra maybe should be a man before they talk about American men. Just because we don't wimpy up like men from other countries, doesn't give you the right to judge JPB. But any case, poor old trampy, slut Barb got what was coming to her.

Every word he said is a fact of life. The foreigners,especially those readers of Lit,appears to be asylum graduates. And most are illiterate. I suspect that their double digit IQ don't allow them to understand what they are attempting to read. Sad.

Oh,JPB,the story is excellent. 5***** !!

This is a faithful husband, strange... Well written and to the point, throw the unfaithful wife away.

The story is not realistic. However, the story had to be unrealistic or else she could not have been caught.

First, they would not be having sex in the back seat of a car. That is what teenagers do because they have no place to go and cannot afford a motel. Unless, the ex-boyfriend was married, the sex would have been in his apartment which would have made it impossible for her to be caught. Otherwise, it would have been in a motel.

Second, even in the unlikely event sex occured in the back seat of a car, it would not occur in a place as public as the parking lot of a club where people that walk by might see. Instead, they would have driven to some remote dark area; perhaps where lovers park but don't park next to another car.

In addition to being unrealistic, the action of husband is extremely harsh. The proper thing would to forgive and give the wife another chance. If a man wishes to be married, it is foolish to divorce a wife because one time she cheated or had an affair. He can replace her, but the next wife is just as likely to cheat.

After all, it is the nature of women to find a good and dependable mate and provider, and then when ovoluting to have sneaky sex with a more symmetrical man and climax with that man and to not climax with her mate (although she may fake it) in order to select the best genes for her eggs. Women that did not select the best available genes for their eggs given a low risk opportunity are not our ancestors.

Although it's just a story, it does reflect the author's own thoughts and stance on the issues involved. As he's previously indicated. People who cheat, either by intent or spur of the moment, are, by their very nature, unable to provide the emotional stability a relationship requires. For some of us, it is a hard lesson to have to learn. On the other hand, once bitten, twice shy.

As for European and others, their own marital dilemmas are no different, at least for the men. From my personal experience, European men are no less apt to leave a cheating spouse as American men (some foreign romance films portray unfaithfulness and forgiveness as social sophistication, but that's a ruse used to convey the screenwriters/directors view of how things should be). However, there is a disparity in the women. American women are more likely to be contrite when found out. Where as European women, especially, French women, are prone to a "laissez-faire" type of attitude.

Of course, all of the above is just a general observation, as some women, even French women, are as faithful as any other women. And yes, many a European man is more likely to be unfaithful to their wives/girlfriends, than their American counter parts. I could claim it's the culture, but it isn't. Rather, I think it has to do with opportunity and human nature. And in that, I think we are all much the same.

By the way, I found the story to be very direct and equally poignant.

and the BACK SEAT BOYS. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for sharing.

and a frustated cheater cant make a cuck out of him, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very unfulfiling ending. Kinda just hit the brakes and left the car with the engine running

I have to agree with RePhil on this one, the end was a little less than what was needed.

Good read as always. Thanks

Wife failed to communicate, husband was naive and didn't know anything about sex or female sexual responsiveness. She really did attempt to minimize his humiliation and should have been given a chance to enter counseling with him. Not a very satisfying end! Dan

Line " "I'm sorry that you saw that Rob, but even so it shouldn't cause us to get a divorce." lol... WTF did she expect him to do say ok you can continue to fuck him in the backseat of the car I purchased for you.... What a moron! Communication , trust, honesty, love, respect are all ingredients to a good marriage... Like Ron said if he was such a lousy fuck she should've said something he's not a mind reader.... And the way she put him down didn't do her case any good ... " he's a good fuck" what is wrong with this moron? I agree with rob what happens if 20 of her ex's pop up would that be another reason for her to act like a whore? Nice story no bullshit games straight to justice....

you are the one i love,,, 1 MORE WAY TO LEAVE, tk u mlj lv nv

Rob got the sex complain from his just future exwife so the fruit of the fixed sexual skils will harvest a Second Chance woman.......................Early communication......

BTW JPB has a new good Running Husband story on SOL and against this story he wrote a longer happy ending epiloge. The title is: "The Trip to Rancho Mirage".

That 's what all cheating whore skank slut cunt wives say. "It's only sex. It's you I love."

Fuck them all. Husband did the right thing. DIVORCED the cunt.

If your gona do something do it right and always finish it. This story needs to be finished. What the hell happened next?

Some chicks just don't get it. Stupid bitch.

in other words, you get to support me in the style i wish to become accustomed and remain there and i get to fuck you over. ain't love grand honey? not hardly!

Whether they "cheat" on you or not, this is the way all women are wired! Who really wants to get married? Women do! Women want to get married because it is in their DNA and their training. They need a man to make money for them like some kind of work whore and to do all their grunt work around the house. In the best case scenario, this is so that they can raise the man's babies and keep the home presentable. That best case rarely happens anymore. Now they use the man until his net worth is high enough, then they divorce him, take half plus the house plus child support and leave his remains in the gutter. Like the corporate raiders of the '80's when a man's break up value exceeds his dividend return, they simply dismantle him and sell off the pieces. Then they do it again with the next lucky winner. You have to be a fool to get married, let alone to get married twice. Never marry a divorced woman! She is now practiced in destroying men, that is why second marriages fail at such a high rate! If you think you are in love, go see a psychologist and get treated for it before it destroys you!

@ sugna I think the marriage with same country woman may be mistake after divorce. Somebody ex husband could find a better second chance woman from abroad. Look at this North Caroline guy from You Tube:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIvJms3wlaY

He wrote to his video:

I was married to an American bitch for 18 years. She got away with fraud and turned my oldest daughter against me. Going through divorce in my mid 40's I decided to look for love in a country that was family oriented. I married a beautiful 18 yr old Filipina and now I feel young again and in love!!!

I think the succesful marriage with trans continal women may be same good or better to a same country woman candidates...........

A personal note: When I looked at this video, that time I became REVENGE STORY FAN. I did not read any revenge stories that time, but I was ready to ENJOY them and I became a (not foundamentalist) BTB forever....................

Loved it, JPB!

5 Stars!

YES, an author that writes the truth, I do hate other stories JPB, wimp story lines, nothing erotic about a husband finding his wife cheating. This one shows a wife that still thinks her husband is stupid, and will put up with anything because of love and devotion. Kicked her to the curb. That is why I support legislation to ban no fault divorce... why lose 50% of everything you worked so hard for when the cheating spouse will reap the rewards.

No doubt he couldn't forgive her. She should have talked with him about the poor sex they were having...That's what married people should do...

sadly the majority of women dont like sex all that much, the way they get it.

I've heard it over and over. The key is teaching each other what you want and together agree on whats you both will do.

also sadly most women dont really love their husbands all that much. I am convinced of it. They marry for security, for a "family of their own", or to escape their parents home, or because they dont want to be alone. And the poor guy pays for this in so many many ways :( a crappy sex life assuredly being one of them.

Its why of all the divorced couples I know, in every case, it was due to the wives cheating, in every single case.

....I was a virgin and lets just say she'd been around the block. Many times.

Basically, she showed me what she liked. Because I could do it exactly like she wanted and I could do what I like too, basically we both got what turned us on most.

Now 40 years later, we do it exactly how *I* like! I like it doggy style, she went through menopause and can't take my cock for very long with her thinned vaginal walls. Doggy style gets me off the quickest and because of that, with little interest in sex, she goes into the bedroom when I'm ready, lubes herself up, gets up on her knees. I come in, lube my cock, get into place and slide it in, pounding her until I get my nut. She might have gotten it exactly how she wanted it the first 25 years, I'm going to get it my way the next 40 years!

I liked the story but burn the bitch

16F2

it didn't mean anything, it was only sex.

wouldn't you think, that if he wasn't getting the job done when they were dating, she would have said something, or at least before they got married? the only reason I can think of not to, is that she was looking for a guy to support her fat ass for the rest of her life.

which is an excuse but not THE answer. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks, Rob, for kicking Barb out. Now I can fuck her whenever I want.

Jeff (aka tom anon)

he should have taken his tire iron to Barb's car. JPB strikes again!

Same thing happened to me, kind of. My fiancé and I were about three months from our wedding day when she decided it might be best if she fucked her old boyfriend for old times sake. I guess she liked it pretty well, because then she went back to him again and again. We didn't live together and had our own apartments. I knew about him, he was a friend until he broke up with my wife to be and moved away, then she and I got serious.

I found out he was the only guy she'd been with, he'd popped her cherry and banged her on a regular basis for about 2 years. Between him and me, she admitted to fucking another guy about 10 times, but for some reason, she didn't really count him because his cock was long and thin. Weird. Now, I'm no shrimp in the cock department, about 7 1/2" long and thick at 6" around. But as inexperienced as I was, I knew her cunt was a little 'loose'. No matter, I had fun and thought she had fun with sex and I was in love.

It turns out, Tom had a horse cock. About 9" long and over 7" around is what I found out later. About two week before our wedding, my best friend, just like the story, stopped by and told me the bad news. Tom was going to her apartment and she was spending the night at his house, a few miles out of town. Like all men or women cheated on, I couldn't believe it. Seeing is believing and I waited until my buddy called again and said he followed her to Tom's house.

I got my video camera and my buddy picked me up and then dropped me off a little away from Tom's. I eased up in the dark and they weren't even in his bedroom with the drapes pulled, he was banging her in his hot tub on the back deck, bent over the side. I got it on video for a while and when he busted his nut in her, just like JPB's story, I set my camera down and clapped. How I did it with a broken heart I'll never know. But I jumped over the railing and onto the porch, walking right over to them. They both pulled back into the water, as far away as the could. I went around until I was next to my fiancé and grabbed her hand and pulled her engagement ring off and just left.

Of course, she called and called, while I avoided her. For a week I avoided her, even when she stopped by the house. She got ahold of my parents, her parents and even our siblings to try and get me to talk with her. I avoided them too and erased their messages. I loaded my camping gear and snuck out of town, after changing the locks on my door and asking the police to keep an eye on the place. I was owed 2 weeks of vacation I'd planned to take for our honeymoon and was even reimbursed when I called and cancelled at the resort we planned to stay at.

I was gone for the full two weeks and when I came back, it was to pick up my stuff from my apartment, I'd found a new job about 450 miles away. No one was around or saw me as I packed everything owned and drove away. In three days I was moved into a new apartment and started my new job which paid marginally more than my previous one but at least no one knew where I was and would leave me alone.

Now you knew that wouldn't be the end of my story, didn't you? After the verbal drubbing my parents and everyone else left on my phone, I didn't want to talk to anyone. But I did make about a dozen copies of my ex's sex tape and sent it to everyone, her folks, my folks, our siblings, her and even good old Tom! I drove to another state about 200 miles away to mail them.

I didn't contact anyone over the next 5 years. My parents, excoriating me over needing to accept my ex's 'mistake', although they hadn't known what the 'mistake' was, both angered and hurt me. And hurt of course, is the most powerful of all. My job ended up better than I'd hoped at a time when I just wanted escape. I moved up and within 3 years was making more than I'd ever dreamed, just barely into six figures, this being in the early 90's when it was a lot of money! In 5 years, I had nearly doubled that. I lived alone, had my own home which was very nice, a split level rambler with 5 bedrooms and 3 baths. It sat on 15 acres with no neighbors.

It was a nice Saturday morning when I was on my front porch with a cup of coffee and a full carafe when I saw a car pull up. I just sat and watched, not bothering to get up when my brother and sister stepped out. They were silent when they walked up on the porch and sat, while I watched curiously, not sure how they would have found me. Without saying anything I got up and went into the house while they waited and came back with two cups and poured their coffee. Both took cream and sugar but I sure as hell didn't offer any and they didn't ask, just started sipping their own coffee.

"Everyone is sorry, Jake." My sister was the first to speak. I just looked at her.

"We all saw the tape and the instant we did, it was obvious how wrong we all were." Still, I didn't say anything.

Then William broke in. "Why didn't you stay, Jake? Just run off and hide? What happened to your balls?" That pissed me off and I just got up, took my cup and carafe and went back into the house and slammed the door behind me. They took the hint and I heard their car leaving.

My mom and dad showed up the next day. They were apologetic and learned from my brothers mistake, not blaming me for anything. They just apologized and then talked, catching me up on everything. Apparently, and during this entire visit I sat and listened until toward the end, Teri, my ex, had eventually moved in with Tom. It lasted about 3 months and by that time, neither could stand the other. She had moved back to her old apartment and was still working the same old job, rarely even dating, but staying in contact with my folks, wondering if they'd heard from me. When I'd had enough, I stood, thanked them and hugged my mom and shook my dads hand. Then I went back into the house and closed the door.

It was only about 3 weeks later and those SOB's told Teri where I lived. I didn't hear the car drive up and the doorbell was a surprise. The car was one I didn't recognize and when I opened the door and saw it was Teri, I just closed it in her face.

Teri must have been really surprised when the door opened back up. By that time I was already watching TV and my wife answered it, telling me not to be rude, while holding our 3 year old on her hip! She invited Teri in and asked if she could help her, not realizing who she was. This was my chance. I stood and walked over to where Teri and my wife stood there.

"Teri, this is my wife Joan and my son, tye. Joan, Tye, this is my whore ex girlfriend who screwed me over with an old boyfriend right before our wedding."

Then I turned, took my seat in my favorite chair and turned Sportscenter up.

That was almost as good as a JPB story.

Good for you.

Anon We need more sexual majority authors here. Why do you write this to a story?

@Sugna In the USA the more and more % of 25-30 years old men do not want to be husbands!

Women complain less and less men want to be married husbands in the 25-30 years age. The sad side: In the USA some thing changed the women have in average 25-26 sex partners before marriage and millions of men are who are virgins above 30 years. The net porn sites are cheaper as a marriage and the net porn do not bring home STDs, bastards, violent con loverboys etc....

Many 25-30 years old single men complain wives with the extramarital sex can bring bastards into the marriage and after divorce they have to pay the children support in a lot of USA's states. I laughed when I heard women begin to support such movement the ex husbands do not pay children support in such USA states where the family law is old style and the ex husbands pay children support to bastards! They are afraid the lack of husband candidates. Ha...Ha...Ha...

The 25-30 years old generation complanin the sociaty background show the husbands to be negative persons, for example in movies, TV serials, soap operas so the more and more % of 25-30 years old generation want to avoid the marriage.

I think the sexual majority 25-30 years reader meet the cuckolding stories they will think they decaided well to avoid the marriage...............to eat creampie from strangers as a marriage.

What a stupid bitch. Out of all the excuses she could have made the stupidest one was used. Just another of the idiotic cunts who believe "It's only sex. I love only you" excuse ever works. Actually if the name of this genre was changed from "Loving Wives" to "Stupid Cunts" nothing would change.

Just a thought

If she was dissatisfied with their sex life she owed it to him to bring it up with him.

Maybe they could consult a sex therapist and improve things.

MAYBE he might agree to an "open marriage" (one where she would have to accept that he, too, might take other lovers!).

Maybe they get a divorce and she is free to do what she wants.

But if she "LOVES" him, she does NOT cheat on him, if she can't be comfortable discussing things with him then, guess what? She LIVES with it!

The whole line of

" you did not lack for anything from me" is fascinating. First it is probably a big lie and she might not even notice where she was failing and second because if she is dissatisfied she has the obligation to seduce him or explain what she needs.

It is not love, it is just sex! Bullshit, it isn't either! It is about power! It is about getting over on other people. In this case she was getting over on two men. Sex is a physical act. Like dancing, it is learned, it can be taught, and a person can get better at pleasing their partner. There is NEVER a reason to find another partner, unless you simply do not like the one you are with! She is a typical idiot. She is ruled by her ego, not her mind or even her heart. She is all about HER. She is a useless as a wife.

just look at the responses. I have mixed thoughts on this one. I do believe she loves him, only because she never sought out her ex boyfriend 3 months ago, it was a chance encounter. yes, she did it for 3 months, and did it discreetly. I do believe he still loves her, otherwise he wouldn't be so upset. the biggest mistake here that I see, is that for as long as they were married, she never said a word, but then again, he never asked either. he never noticed her run to the bathroom to masturbate? does this seem odd, from a male perspective? I would suggest counselling at the least, just to see if it works. who thinks it's that easy to find a woman to commit yourself to?

These women!! FFS, they will never, ever, ever, ever tell you the fucking truth.

It was a little over the top the way she explains his lackluster performance. Maybe he WAS that bad. But if that IS true then think how easy it would be to change it. He has an easy road up from the bottom of the doldrums of mediocre sex to something quite a bit better.

Frankly, I think hubby is a bloody moron and deserves a real kick in the ass for being so unimaginative in the sack. But where do you lying, cheating, stupid bitches learn your communication skills? F.F.S.

She flat out tells him he's lousy in bed! What's going to change THAT little bit of information? She has no real love or respect or him. He treats her like a queen and she cheats on him. What's to miss? She's a cheating slut and he's well shod of her.

I enjoy reading most of your stories but please explain why that almost all of your stories seem to be incomplete like there is so much more that could or needs to be said ?

You mentioned about both of them not noticing. It is a possibility that he probably didn't notice. If she wasn't getting off, then she was probably faking it. As much as guys say that they would be able to tell, most of the time they wouldn't be able to.

Communication between the two really sucked.

I FUCKING HATE INCOMPLETE STORIES...to top it she and Jeff got away with it...divorces hurt the injured spouse equally as the causing it. Jeff should have had his fave rearranged and his balls stomped...and the whore ...how a bout some one stab her in those dark parking lot she frequented...

Extremely Altruistic. TK U MLJ LV NV

Usual JPB copy-paste story. It's always the same over and over and over. If there was a part two the protagonist would take the slut back.

I have to agree, you need to take them further.

"I'm fucking Jeff because he gives me something you don't. You are a beautiful man, a fantastic husband in every way but one. You are lousy in bed. "

- Oh yeah.Good excuse. That'll work. ~ She's damn lucky that he didn't punch her right in the face!

Have a friend of the family who came to visit with his daughters. He then told us he was getting a divorce. Now here, she never told him anything. In my friends life she always told him he was great. So when she slept around and used that as an excuse he went ballistic. He had come to say goodbye to us, it seems to add insult to injury she slept with her boyfriend in the house with the girls supposedly next door, but they came home with the neighbors daughters as the mother there had to take the father to the hospital ASAP. So all four girls walked in on mommy dearest with asshat in extremist. She told the girls to play outside, as if the girls didn't know what was going on. No attempt to even cover themselves.

My friend works for the government doing something or other that he will never tell me about and I am smart enough not to ask. That said, they want him happy, and not distracted. Now y'all are thinking the daughters are the ones who told him, and you would be right, except for one thing, the government was doing a biannual security check on him and his household. They gave him everything including the attorney who did his divorce. Since she did what she did in front of minors not only her daughters but the neighbors children, she got the book thrown at her. He made out like a bandit. He didn't want the house, it was a lease. He just wanted the kids and her gone. She got three to five, and boyfriend got seven to fifteen. He moved away with his girls and we chat every so often. It's been over eighteen months and he says he met a beautiful coworker who his daughters love and he is almost if not already there as well. She also is in the same line as he is. Wife gets supervised visits when she gets out, and he won't take them to see her behind bars. When he heard her explanation for her behavior he asked the same questions, as far as I know he never did get an answer. So sometimes truth is stranger than fiction, but sometimes it is dead on....

I have been in the husband's place. When I caught my wife in bed with one of her many lovers, she looked me in the eyes and said, "You have not gone lacking for sex. I have not once denied you. My having sex with other men has not hurt you in the least." I looked at her and said, "That's where you are wrong. Aren't you the least bit curious how I managed to catch you?" I slammed the paperwork down on the table in front of her. "That's my latest doctor's report. You and one of your lovers has given me an STD! Now tell me again how your having sex with other men hasn't hurt me, you whore!"

She wanted her cake, her husband and boy toy. Stupid woman..

Can you please finish your stories? Virtually everyone wants you to so it is not just me.

This is the perfect ending.

You need to stand up and face your problem(s) in order to move on with your life. Then find someone or something to fill that void.

I get we read these for free, but why are so many writers on here so lazy they can't/won't finish a story?

Well considering that this story has been here for about 10 years, and your own interest in it ending. Perhaps you would like to follow the pattern of such writers as FTDS and write what you consider an appropriate ending? Just a thought.

Thanks for the offering.

A lying cheating slut is nothing to love a miss. You do not miss cheating slut who gave you bad sex. You an idiot.

Hot damn he finished a story!

The writer is a real woman hater, women just aren't like this in real life. I've been reading this shit now for a couple of months and I could never quite put my finger on what was off with these stories and then it hit me like a ton of bricks.

I always wondered about the writers (I'm convinced there only 3-4 of these guys) having the loving wife or girlfriend say something about it only being sex. For the longest time that pissed me off because it made no sense...and then it struck me why it doesn't make sense. Women are so different from men that it's said we're from different planets. Women are all about connecting on the emotional level so for woman to go all out for sex with some strange dick there would have to be a strong emotional connection with the person connected to that strange dick. So much so that she wouldn’t have the connection to the poor husband or boyfriend she has chosen to abandon. She simply would not make these hollow meaningless protestations of deep, unfailing love and devotion for the jilted husband or boyfriend these 3 writers find so compelling.

Bottom line is that the stories are written so obviously from a man's point of view that it makes the story completely unbelievable, just so much hogwash. Men do believe it could be "just sex" because men think with their dicks, the lower head rules the upper head. But women are all about the heart and without that engaged, there really isn't that strong a sex drive, not on the level these 4 writers try to convey. Now if she's transferred the love, then the story makes sense up to the point of all the i love and only you bullshit.

So please, continue to write this shit, just make sure you give the betrayed husband/boyfriend plenty of ammunition to go for the nuclear response when he burns the bitch and her bastard by having the caught slut say something like "yeah, his dick is bigger, he lasts longer, I get a complete meal when I swallow his load and I think I've developed a deeper love for him than I ever had with you...if I ever loved you at all'. Then just go for the all out assault letting the betrayed not be more than fair, to want to deeply hurt the woman I'll probably always love. I think you would have a deeper fan base from the btb crowd if you'd just turn the cuckolds loose to totally rampage that sluts life the way real American men would when faced with that kind of emasculation

Hell froze over ten years ago and I didn't even notice. I know it did, because one of JPB's characters actually divorced his cheating whore of a wife. There is no other explanation for it.

Wow, wait a second here.... She wanted to stay married but justified her cheating by telling Rob his sex sucks she needs more. Ya, now that will stop a divorce in-progress - not. Her only way to get sexual satisfaction is to cheat with Jeff or finger herself. This surely will keep Rob in her saddle - not.

The one reoccurring undercurrent to all these surprised cheating wife discoveries is how the wife never raise the husbands suspicion - it must be due to the husbands complete trust so he never looks for any signals/signs.

Only think missing in this story is Rob's revenge on Jeff for screwing a married woman (even if she is a an arrogant psycho).

Read it again and decided there wasn't enough revenge. The asshole got away with no punishment and the cheating wife will now just fuck anyone she wants. He's free but she's still a cunt. Oh well.

This was good stuff. The reality of what was happening didn't devastate him as much as I would have expected, but he cut her out of his life like the cancer she was,. The only thing I would have wanted was for him to ask her how she would feel if he was the one getting some on the side because she didn't attract him as much as she used to.

Just a poor pissant of a man. So weak he runs from his wife he says he loves and even files a false statement to get a restraining order. What a fucking wimp. A real pussy.

OK. So she cheated. Not good. But any man, a real man, Who loved his wife would make an effort to put it all back together. It might not work but at least it should be tried.

Hey Dallas, why don't you stop trying to impose your shitty ideas on others and go back to blowing bubba

Last paragraph sucks. Who could still love a cheating skank?

Zero stars for any story where either Wife OR husband do this!!!

Even if the rest of the story was as great as Shakespeare's best; no stars for this horrible ploy!

I understand him getting a Restraining Order against his wife and old boyfriend. He simply needed a day to get his stuff out of the house and moved into his apartment. No judge in America would make a big deal out of it. He did it to avoid a confrontation with his cheating wife. I liked the way this story played out.

tale per usual frum thy cuck author

for Jeffie?