All Comments on 'Barbell Bottom'

Excellent! I really hope you'll stick to your promise to "be continued..." It'd be thrilling to see our "heroe" be completely turned out and become a sex-starved slut to big domineering cocked tops.

Thanks for the story anyway

Wow! That was a hot story!

That was really hot !

Pure filth, loved it.

It would be so hot to have them become a couple, including coming out to his friends!

Need more!!!

One of the best stories I have ever read. So fucking hot.

def need so much more

Great story. Looking forward to part 2.

Awesome!! I love your stories so much...looking forward to part 2! :)

Awesome and hot story!! I can't wait for part 2!!

hope your new Daddy invites the Blonde to watch you take Daddy's breeding

Loved this story

Did he f*** his ass all again and did he somewhere along the line get him to suck his dick and treat him just like a little girl

I loved the entire premise of the story, but one overused word in so many stories kills it for me, “Daddy”. Any other adjective for a dominant would be better. I can read over that word and not loose the strength of the scenario propelling me to a sexual conclusion.

Hottest gay story I have ever read. Anyone know of any better. Email me at qeteshhunt@gmail.com. I am female but love nothing better than MMF, were the men are bi-sexual

Another of your oh so hot stories. I too would love to read the next chapter.

Loved it. The dirty talking was intense.

Amazing story!!!!!! This got me so look hard and horny!!! I want some hot cock and ass fucking right now!! Keep going with these types of stories!! Great job!!!!

good story, got me all worked up.

I have stroked myself to orgasm to this story several times, I always squirt ropes to it. So fucking hot, I'd love for my anal virginity to get taken like this.

Dude! What a HOT Fucking Fuck-fest! Please give us more Reluctant/Seduction/Sweaty-Assed Man Sex!!!

oh man, this needs to continue

fuck!, man knows how to take it!

Excellent!

Your stories turn me on. Get so hard and have to jack off

Hate, Hate, Hate writers who end their stories”to be continued” and then don’t continue . But part of my hate comes from how hot this story is. More, please!

This story is a TOUR DE FORCE.

Current rating 4.72 (94.4 = a solid A).

I marked it 5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤!

This story has so far got 268 'faves' out of 114.6k views, which is 2.34 'faves' per 1k views (a triple A faves-to-views ratio.)

In this story I identified with the bottom guy.

I loved it.

I loved it.

I loved it.

Above expectations!

👍👍!

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He was completely taking over my ability to resist. His presence and swagger were staggering. I hated him and wanted to do what he said at the same time.

When his mushroom head pressed against my tight anus I could feel my breath catch in the depths of my heterosexual cavern.

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Replicant2018 - 3 months ago

Your stories turn me on. Get so hard and have to jack off

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Ass cherry popped - ✅

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

Imaginatively conceived and brilliantly written. 💥💥💥💥💥 (5.0 = 100%)!

Makes me remember when I love anal pleasanter so much! And I'm married....44 yrs. Nothing beats a good, hard cock in the ass. Except maybe a nice flick of my sensitive nipples while being taken!!

first time commenting. I love your stuff. This was super hot. perfect as a little one shot vingette or I'd be interested to see what happens next with the shower and the blonde. ;)

So desperate for this sequel!

oh my!!! i really thoroughly enjoyed this one!!! not sure throughout the whole story if i wished i was top or bottom...lot's to think about for later (wink)

This is an awesome story, incredibly erotic.

As a bisexual man, I have struggled with self-loathing at times because of my attraction to men, and reading stories like yours, about being seduced by another man and having consensual, enthusiastic and mind-blowing sex with him make is not only incredibly arousing, but also validating, liberating.

One of the things I love the most about your writing are the naughty little cliffhangers you end some of your stories with. No matter how much I read them, they always leave me aching with anticipation and raw need. As a reader, I feel as if you are using the cliffhanger to mess with my mind in the same way the dominant top works the brain of his bottom within the story. I love it.

Being willed to submit in the gym is one of my fantasies. Yes, I’m that married guy that wants to lose his anal virginity. Just gotta find the right time, place, & guy to seduce me. Lol, it won’t take much seducing. This is a smoking hot story!

Fuccck I love this story, always gets me soo hard. Mmm!

Sooooo Hot

When will you continue?

Whew. I had my cherry popped by a well hung older neighbor when I was 18, an unbelievable day.

Loved it. Could hardly get any better. Maybe more of the top tellin the fuckee how lucky he was to get this big hot cock sliding in and out of his butt. Actually when I get a cock like that fucking my gut, I feel like I want him to just keep fucking me for ever and NEVER take it out.

LOVED IT!!! As a slutty muscle bottom, and an exhibitionist, I love being overpowered and getting pounded in a public place. The thought of being caught, or getting fucked in front of somebody (who might join in and fuck me too) is such a turn on. I would have sucked his cock in the elevator and begged him to rip my clothes off and keep fucking me all the way up to his place.

waitng for part 2

OUTSTANDING STORY.....almost too good to be true but the seduction and your submission is HOT AF! Can't wait to hear more....

Would love more of these 2!! sequel please!

Five stars were certainly not enough. My backside is still virgin territory but I want to give in badly to another.

This was an incredibly hot story! The only thing that would make it better was if the lawyer was black (a perticular pleasure of mine...).

My kind of workout! And a secret fantasy of mine......

So hot! Want to join your gym!!!

This was really good! I'd love to read more! And I'd love to find 2 slutty bi guys to be mine 💜😋

Couldn't stop reading. Wishing it was me. Please finish his journey and take us where you want it to go. Great story

“…….and cocked a curious grin.” Great narrative. Wonderful pace, imagry and vocabulary. Thank you for allowing your creative energies to flow with great passion and eroticism. 💋

That was so hot, I hope he turns that cute little straight boy into a total buttslut sex slave, and just... has his naked all the time crawling around his apartment with only a leash and collar. Totally, and completely mind broken, and turned into a cumdrunk formerly super straight, boy toy.

I love the interactions with the excercise equipment. The stairstepper was hot..