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LordSlamdawgg over 7 years ago

Really enjoyed how author diverges and divulges simultaneously pleasure and propiety vying for top billing in Cecilia ' s mind

Ashson is stepping up his already formidable game with this contest of wills and thrills.

Full marks * * * * *

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Perfectly Hot!

In this category I never know what to expect when reading a story - I like a reluctant heroine not a nonconsenting one, which seemed to be exactly what I got in this story! I wasn't sure where it was going in the beginning but I absolutely loved how it ended! It definitely got me wet and worked up! Good job!

tazz317 over 7 years ago

THERE MUST BE 50 WAYS TO POP A CHERRY

this story was just 1. TK U MLJ LV NV

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