All Comments on 'Bathroom Meetings'

Just wanted to say, since I can't see it here, that this story went through 3 submission failures, before Teloz edited it to fix a few cultural spellings and story suggestions. So it's with thanks to him that this is here for you to read.

Good quick story. All discription and little dialog leaves one feeling a little empty. You had me stroking but not cumming and that of course is why we read incest!

The sex was great as long as he was trying to get rid of the boyfreind.... I laughed outloud when I got to the end. I loved it keep writing.

I enjoy reading this story. It is very good & I agree it is funny as hell. Don't stop writing stories like this one.

Loved the twist at the end. Overall sexy story. Just wished it was a bit longer

loved the story. hilarious ending. you have a real talent for wry comedy in your stories. dont be afraid to stretch the sex scenes out some. would love to see a second chapter to this and more chapters for your other works.

that was a great quick read. it was funny and hot.

Agreed Its very simple to the point and arrousing and yet comical at the end when trying to figure out who won in the end there lol.

turnabout is fair play!

Lol, got you by the ballz

Buhahaha!! I'd be going straight into her room, heh. Tell her what my 'plan' had been, then tell her I was going to fuck her my way now! ....and no, you can't fuck that douche honey!! ;)

Well DONE!! What a little firecracker she is!

Loved how perfect this story turned out. The ending made me smile.