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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
EVE ABOUT TO HAVE HER VIRGINITY TAKEN

LOVE THIS FIRST STORY. BE MY SLUT.

READING THIS WAS LIKE WATCHING ALL THIS TAKING PART.

VERY EROTIC AND SEXUAL. EXCELLENT WRITING AND FANTASTIC STORY.

goesallnightgoesallnightover 11 years ago
very lovely story

Well written and it has everything. I like girls like this, who need it badly. Thanks so much for writing it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
proofreading?

TOO / TO / TWO

STAIRS / STARES

sort it out

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good build up

More please!

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