All Comments on 'Beach Loving'

I recalled my first time at the beach while reading your story. It was truly surreal with the sound of the crashing waves, the open, moonlit sky above us with all of its stars, the open ocean in front of us. My partner and I spent the entire night making love and didn't stop until the sun started to rise. But, yes, sand is something to definitely avoid.

I don't comment on many stories... only the really good ones. Very sexy, but the best thing was the way you wrote the dialogue. The characters were the most believable I've read. Great work!

Really hot, the characters

are very real, felt like

i was there, and i never

comment on any submissions

so you should be happy cause

this is seriously hot. It

couldn't have been any better.

Good Work.

xoxo

Fucking hot story.

But doing that gets sand in places sand should never be

Ouch ;]

Done it. Loved it. Not too keen on the sand issue though. But this story basically depicts the first time I did it on the beach. Story was fantastic :D

Been there done that, native of Cape Cod, nice to remember those days