All Comments on 'Beat Francis at Arm Wrestling Pt. 02'

Oh, I enjoyed this chapter even more than the last--and not simply because of the rematch. Wonderful setting and character develpment, this is incredibly vivid and so enjoyable to think of a future, post-apocalyptic Wild West town.

The multiple sources of conflict were the most pleasant surprise; not just Jenny wanting a rematch but needed to better define her own prejudices, if any, in the face of others--and then facing the possible consequences.

If the first chapter drew a lot on the initial quest inside the Fallout 2 game, then this one blooms well beyond it in three-dimensions and excitement!

I also REALLY enjoyed the sex scene with Francis; very much beauty and the beast and the earning of mutual respect, the fact that he has always followed the rules agreed upon and does not go back on them (even making it difficult to achieve, where's the fun in giving up so easy??) and that Jenny is the same way makes them equal sportsmen. Which just made for a hot as hell coupling! Woo! ^.^

Now...a new conflict! I can guess who is attacking her, but I shall wait to see whether it is as it seems....

Great story, KatieTay! Please continue, I'm really enjoying it. :)

hee hee thank you!