All Comments on 'Beauty'

Ashson,

This premise and the angle you used to tell this story was so much fun and I would even say refreshing. Please go for a second chapter, she has so much to learn about herself. Honestly, this is gold. She is naïve, yes, but she will learn to play and get what she wants. But for now, Peter is a great teacher and will open her mind... and other things.

...from your usual. (No criticism, simply noting the nice change)

.....I'm sure she went over the next day too. To delete the photos she didn't want to exist. Amazing write up. Kept me on till the end.

Demure and decadent at the same time. You are the most unusual writer I have ever come across.