by frozenhero1
Always want to be the first to comment but I always come up with simply amazing!
I've been watching for an update and hoping to find one. I'm so happy to see it and you didn't disappoint. This was a great chapter. Hot sex as well a plot advancement. What more could a girl want. Thanks for a great chapter and i'll be waiting for more.
Brian's a man slut, can't seem to pick one girl. Great story and series. Keep writing more. 5 star worthy.
This is the series that I used to introduce my amazing wife to Literotica, and is the stick that all other stories are compared with (nothing has come close yet).
When we found chapter 21 had finally posted last night, we both stayed up late to read it, and then fucked like crazy. Keep up the great work.
I would love to see this story hitting 30+ chapters.
I have checked in recent months eagerly for new chapter and today I am rewarded with great writing. Glad that you continue this excellent story and it is going strong. There has been a few other stories titled Beauty and the Geek on literotica, but your version remains my favourite. Thanks
With how much Charlie and Miley are turned on by pregnancy talk, I hope there's some pregnant sex between them in future chapters, rather than just saying in an epilogue that they got married and had kids.
Awesome start after the long break. I hope Haley doesn't ruin the relationships by kissing Miley or having sex with Brian. Miley's talk about getting pregnant, is it talk or the real thing this time? I hope Stacey gets her act together and doesn't go after Charlie, since she is dreaming of having sex with him.
There was another great about Charlie and Miley and how they work things through in their relationship. I'm glad Brian was able to have some fun with Haley. I can hardly wait to see how you develop Brian and Sam in the future. Is Miley going to pregnant? It's glad to have this story back.
There won't be any epilogue, the story will simply end. If anything as big as a pregnancy were to happen with Miley, I'd put in in the story.
So happy to have more story! I started reading when 20 was already published and couldn't believe when I got there and it wasn't over. Great chapter here, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Is that all we're going to hear about Brock? That issue was the huge cliffhanger from Ch. 20. Miley took Charlie's injuries really hard and she had to deal with Brock in highschool, so I was looking forward to at least hearing her reaction to the news.
So glad to see this story is progressing again. Love these characters! A fun and lighthearted read, as always. :)
YES!!!!! I was really worried that you'd left this series, uber happy that its still going :D.
Please keep writing this series. It's by far my favorite on the site and you're a great writer.
Thumbs up!
I've read this story twice so please don't let it 'just end'. I was looking at the other posts and this is a great (very realistic)story, plus you have left a few cliff hangers... Brock (as said by another post), Haley?? Sam?? Brian?? Stacey?? quite a few unanswered issues.... would be nice to have a good interesting ending... you are very good at writing wish I could do the same.
I just finished this whole series over the last two nights, and I must say I've never been that entranced by one story before. I truly hope you keep going, and thank you for this so far!
So ready for more chapters! Love your characters, story line, and the fact that I can visualize what you have created with words! Keep it up! Patiently waiting for next chapters! TrulyNatural
at first, i thought miley was a very unsympathetic character just wrapped up in herself. nice gradual evolution.
I love this entire series.Your story gets better and better with each chapter. I eagerly await the next installment.
I can't wait for the next chapter! This is the best story in this site. I can't wait for the next chapter of "We're Screwed" as well. Keep up the fucking good work.
Wow, did not come to this site expecting such a good storyline. I know it's supposed to be erotica, but even without the sex scenes in the series, it would still actually be an interesting read. I really like your characters, and for the most part, the relationships of all the characters one to the other. Read the whole thing in a day, and can't wait for the next installment. Good job,
" It's been a long wait, but the good news is that I'm almost done with chapter 22 as well".
well, we're still waiting two months later.......
could we get a status update possibly telling us you are still alive and writing ?
But WHAT THE FUCK? Where is the next motherfucking chapter?!?!?!
Once again love your work
I've read this while series 5 times now, and please, please, please come up with the next one already.
More please. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapters. As for the story, incredibly erotic and a great read. More!
This chapter ruined the story for me, while this isn't exactly a masterpiece, it's adorable for essentially a stroke story.
Decent character work and an adorable plot, my problem is the whole "white knight" cliche. And the trope of "it's okay to cheat if it's two girls"
Hard to respect Charlie when he's cool with his gf cheating as long as other dudes are cheering them on, or she tells him it's fine.
At this point he's not even a human, he's just a sex toy with eyes.
I think I agree with the other comment. Miley cheated on Charlie twice with the same person and he was ok with it because they are girls? It ruined the story for me because no one would be ok with their GF making out with a girl behind their back for a bunch of guys amusement.
This was going so well too, unfortunate. I know you don't write here anymore and probably will never read this, but the last few chapters were so disappointing.
Just pushes the stereotype that hot chicks can be terrible to their spouses as long as they give them pussy. Charlie just comes off as a cuck.