All Comments on 'Beaver on the Internet'

Just loved the story and it's flow. After years this is the first story that I have ever commented on and that is because of the "smooth" flow and the beautiful payback at the end. Keep up the good work, even though I hope that you can eventually top this tale I have my doubts that it can be done.

what a pair of losers

always wanting their women to do more and more things to get their rocks off...hope she ends up screwing Stan good and proper.....

What, pray tell, is a "full half hour"? You have used this in several stories. Is it a full hour, or a half hour?

The modifiers work well individually, but not together.

Yes, it's a minor complaint.

Dave is going to wonder how he lost his beautiful sexy wife some day.

I know this is an old story but it was good. Surprised so few comments. Thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47