All Comments on 'Because I'm Not Pretty Ch. 02'

You don't need to tell the whole story over again; just point people to it.

Too much Re-capping

I didn't need to read chapter 1 in this story all over again.

Now next chapter please.

Thanks for writing!

How about another chapter

A enjoyed your story. There was some humor and the sex was hot. The only drawback for me was the time spent in chapter two recapping chapter one. I went immediately to chapter two after reading chapter one which is what I'd expect most readers to do. I ended up skipping through most of chapter two to get to the new material. But, again, I don't want to be too critical. It IS a good story and I enjoed it. [Gualterio}

...he slid his finger inside her overly taught vagina,...

taught: past participle, past tense of teach (Verb)

Show or explain to (someone) how to do something: "she taught him to read".

I believe you meant tight? Or at least taut.

He thought he was going to be the only one these sluts played with? Typical male ego. And he was only thinking with his "little head". Didn't really get the point of this exercise.

So often the two women to one guy fantasy.

is going to get complicated when the mother and daughter fuck the young guy....poor old guy is going to get side lined well and truly when mother decides she likes young cock.....such a shame as things were bowling along nicely for them all.....but then women are just sluts and don't give a damn about hurting men....basically turning in to whores......

I liked the humorous part at the ends of the 2 stories. Yep, sex needs a good laugh too.

I am not much into big women, only one reason, they might break me. lol

ok I didn't just say that here. But I did. Ever see the science fiction movie, " Paul " ,,,

only 6ft tall,,, been like that since HS days. (chuckles

....of this man's stories I've read and they all have DIY endings. Too much work: too much disappointment for me. One star. You've lost a reader Magmaman.

Sorry but this is just a rerun of chapter one. Kind of a let down after such a great start with chapter one.

*****Good follow -up with a surprise ending. Thanks for sharing.

A really good follow up but to much repeating of the first one at the beginning