by GeorgieH
I'm amazed this lovely tale only received 1 comment. It's well written and interesting, lovely romp. Thanks Georgie.
Your first paragraph doesn't match with the rest of your story's information or tone. You should change it to say Becky was born first followed 13 months later by her brother.
Just the right speed of development for a brother sister story. Quite believable. Wish there was more.
But still a great read. Love the way you write. Keep it up. Warren