All Comments on 'Becoming a Gal Friday Pt. 01'

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bluesky496bluesky496over 9 years ago

a good start ,i like where this is going , when is the next episode coming out ,soon i hope .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Start

I like this. With his seemingly broad exposure to life,I'm especially enjoying his youthful naivety. Can't wait to read more.

sober71sober71over 8 years ago
Like it

Loving the start. Now for Pt 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story start!!

The perfect ultimate adventure.. Very sexually charged..

Rwa4768Rwa4768about 5 years ago
Good start

This was a great introduction to what looks to be a great story.

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