All Comments on 'Becoming a Woman'

Different from your other stories but still good.

Keep writing! Love your point of view.

You've got your character's inner thoughts and feelings nailed. That's the first part of a good story, first half got me wet. But why so dark and angry instead of sexy? I'd like to read more but I come here to read happier stories. Angst is great but it should lead to someone nicer than Fred.

xoxo,

Di

I almost couldn't read your story because of how it reminded me of my experience. Back in September of 2010, I was raped. It's been nearly eight years ago, but every day it feels like yesterday.

Molto bello. Mi pace Fred.