All Comments on 'Becoming an Oral Slut'

You are a talented writer and a great narrator of your experience or fantasy. Yep, it needs some editing but this is a great start.

I enjoyed it very much.

Would like to Congratulate you on your first writing. Needs some editing as you said but was well written and described. Anxiously await more from you

PS. Your mate better know he’s lucky to have you as his mate and better ttreat you like a princess and (his personal slut behind close doors).

(Not sure on Literotica's etiquette of writing responses on your own stories but I enjoy talking to readers so live big or go home I guess -):

Hi! Thanks so much for your positive reviews and the constructive crit, I value it! I'm an obsessive redrafter to the point of crippling procrastination usually so tried to be a little more fast and loose - guess I went too far the other way this time! Hoping to finish off something a little longer that's been in my drafts forever next.

Best, Gina x

Enjoyed your description and the story. Will watch for more, thanks!

Standing ovation for your first story.

Enthusiasm does go a very long way. Poor technique and gagging are part of the learning process. One should be proud of making an honest effort and doing the best

you can. The desire to improve usually results in success.

Obsessions often have an otherworldly, ethereal quality, you have captured their characteristics nicely.

'all symptoms of a deadly case of cock worship'

May you never recover.

Lovely

You definitely got a niche for giving head lady lol,and my god!!!! I was pumping myself luxuriously whilst reading and had 1 huge,intense cum from it!

And with this being your first & only story,I'm highly impressed.....

Please post more.......

great story of devoted worship!