by susangreenway
Brilliant the way you develop the emotional and power dynamics of all the relationships. I could feel the shame and humiliation of the older ladies, and their excitement, when they were made to defecate on the floor in front of their governesses. I confess to being quite envious.
The last revelation about how when Susan was in charge of the two sisters she "educated" them into the practice of enjoying the sharing of bodily functions is a masterstroke. Well done!
your stories are in generally very great
you mention poo and pee way too much for this story to get interesting ¨
fair you like the fetish but even with that you bring it in to every situation also situations where we get the sisters going with Lori and it didn't match the situation
all up to that point was good but chapter 1 2 3 4 was good but could be better 5 was close to be great but ended weird.
but your stories has something that could become very great
A great series of stories, with what I consider to be a preponderance of bodily functions used as disciplinary measures.