All Comments on 'Becoming the Alpha Male Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing insight

I love this story I've read the first four chapters several times and am truly thrilled to see you have continued hope to read the next chapter soon can't wait. Sitting on the edge of my seat reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I am a man but wish I was debbie not as debbie but as myself. I would be his cum slut slave in a heart beat. I would love sucking his cock in the class room. I need a young man to take me as his slave and humuliate me like he did her

richbwrichbwabout 10 years ago
very good

great story from the get go how mom and son waited for the sex how mom never screwed anybody else is so hot for myself only part that didnt do anything for me was dominating dad and fucking him myself it didnt really fit the rest of the story and sounded kind of gay but the rest of the story was hot really good writing hope you have more soon on this story cant wait keep up the good work

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
wrong category

BDSM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Right category

It started out in this category and should stay here - just because there's some BDSM doesn't mean it stops being incest. Hate it when story threads jump about.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So fucking debauched

Absolutely sucking fucking depraved and red hot.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Story gets better and better.

FseriesFseriesover 1 year ago

2 stars and I barely read any of it. With the two previous installments being so bad and threw me off the story, I have no desire to read anymore of what follows.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Becoming la la land and didn't need the waterworks

Jack506Jack5069 months ago

Could do without the waterworks, but five stars for the subjugation of Debbie.

florbustflorbust5 months ago

Yes I can do without the pee.

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